Ajax's Ascension

The Divine Witness

De: Keleros

Narrado por: Boise Blue, Ally Frey

Reborn on Gryndor with the mythical trait [Divine Witness], Ajax swears to live a life of no regrets. This time, he will seize every opportunity, fight every monster, and plunder every treasure as he enjoys life to the fullest.

If only it were that easy. Humans are considered one of the weakest sentient races, confined to their patch of land but that hasn't changed their nature as they fight amongst themselves forced to split their sources of power instead of unite for the greater whole. In order to see the entire vast richness of the world, Ajax must battle for his life and respect, gaining levels and forcing the other races to acknowledge his and humanities worth.

Ajax’s Ascension to the top won’t be quick or easy.

©2024 Keleros (P)2024 Royal Guard Publishing LLC

Ajax’s

Like the series waiting for the next one. It is an enjoyable series readable on royal road

I like it so far

this is an awesome itziki scenario you know starts as a child works himself up with that said the only negative I have is the stat window where they have to constantly tell you every single stat and the worst part is the author already has a way to show you what's new on the stat but instead of just showing that part he goes through the whole stat window it's only grab I have I'm hoping the second one has less

Bad Female Narration

Story was decent. Male narration good. The female narrated though....bugged me a lot. She spoke so slowly, and emphasized every syllable, all without much feeling most the time, that it sounded like AI, or a kindergarten teacher trying to teach you how. to. properly. enunciate. your. words.

good book but

Good book but to many stats... less stats please. The story itself is interesting and I'm going to try the next book.
Narration was awesome!!

Good

I love the book good plot, twists and action the only real problem I have is how long and boring reading the stats was besides that I can’t wait for book 2

Stats stats stats

There’s about a 5 min long stat run down(I’m on 2x speed so holy hell) every two or three chapters it seems. An exaggeration but one that’s deserved. And also if they have a female narrator on the book why is the male narrator voicing so many female sounding roles, like the system is obviously female sounding but had the male narrator do an annoying performance rather than a normal decent one using a male sounding voice, or just use the female narrator for that part. And the story doesn’t seem to have been run through an editor and it shows with plot points sort of just popping up and not, especially the romance that just got dropped and tagged as a friends with benefits, while the author propped it up to be a more major thing in the beginning with how she stayed by his bed for so long while unconscious. Idk it’s good just a bit lackluster and could be great which is what bothers me the most

Listened on 1.1 to help balance the slow girl reads

The guys voices are the only ones that are easy to listen too. The girls sound like they are reading unknown words for the first time.
Biggest issue is the constant slow reiteration of all the skills just to say he gained 1 level. Hopefully that’s fixed in the next book.
The story is really good though.

Enjoyable Story over all

Overall, I enjoyed Ajax Ascension. The main character was likable and I enjoyed seeing the point of views of other characters in the story. I also enjoy the slow grind as Ajax's character grows. My favorite part had to be when the shadow cat's name became "Fluffy."

The only minor negatives would be the constant reading of Ajax's ability level and some of the voice actors sounded like they were 10 playing a 28 or 40+ year old.

Hopefully the next book will be out soon!

glad to see your evolution

i listened to this story while it was on youtube, i am happy to see that you were able to take this story and get it officially published.

this is a great story that begines like alot of stories out there as reincarnation stories but quickly developes into a full flushed world with logical and unique outlooks on monsters, magic and dungeons as well as showing a character that isnt automatically overpowered but uses the worlds rules and past life to discover new things in the world.

Excellent LitRPG

The story, character development, and magic system are top notch. This is a story that keeps me listening for hours on end. I’m excited for the next entry in the story.
The only thing that makes me upset is that it’s difficult to find another story that is, in my opinion, on par with this one.