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The Mongoliad: The Foreworld Saga, Book 1 Audiobook

The Mongoliad: The Foreworld Saga, Book 1

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Publisher's Summary

In the late 19th century, a mysterious group of English martial arts aficionados provided Sir Richard F. Burton, well-known expert on exotic languages and historical swordsmanship, a collection of long-lost manuscripts to translate. Burton’s work was subsequently misplaced, only to be discovered by a team of amateur archaeologists in the ruins of a mansion in Treiste.

From Burton's translations and the original source material, the epic tale of The Mongoliad was recreated. The story chronicles the journey of a small band of warriors and mystics as they fight to save Europe from the Mongol invasion of the thirteenth century. It also exposes the secret workings of powerful clandestine societies that have been driving world events for millennia.

This fascinating and enthralling first novel in The Mongoliad trilogy fuses historical events with a gripping fictional narrative. Co-written by Neal Stephenson, Greg Bear, E. D. deBirmingham, Mark Teppo, Joseph Brassey, Erik Bear, and Cooper Moo, The Mongoliad: Book One is an unforgettable epic.

©2012 Greg Bear, Neal Stephenson, E. D. deBirmingham, Mark Teppo, Joseph Brassey, Erik Bear, and Cooper Moo (P)2012 Brilliance Audio, Inc.

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    Stephen United States 04-08-13
    Stephen United States 04-08-13 Member Since 2016
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    "Such a Disappointment"

    Being Hungarian in heritage, I always try historical books that incorporate that heritage.I don't know much about the Mongolian invasion and was hoping this first novel might touch on that. It doesn't. That's OK. The actual storyline, as written, is very confusing.

    There is no clear individual to get to know and like. Nor is there a real villian to dislike. Too many undeveloped characters with seemingly disconnected plots. It seems like each author was assigned a character and tried to develop action scenes for that character. Then the editor smashed the storylines together like mashed potatoes. Thus, the story wanders across this book like the Mongols did across the steppes.

    Yet there is enough to keep me going. I have Book 2 and will continue there hoping things get better.

    Luke Daniels as a narrator is just as effective as the book is written. Just meh.

    Not horrible but not great. Just average.

    4 of 6 people found this review helpful
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    Chuck United States 02-17-14
    Chuck United States 02-17-14 Member Since 2011
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    "It's...Okay."

    Like most people, it was Neal Stephenson's name that drew me to this book. Then I read the description and it sounded like a great story, it however, falls short of that. It's not bad and it's not great, it's just okay. The story is interesting and has kept my interest despite the characters not having a lot of depth or development.

    I don't mind the writing by committee so much, however, there are a few things about the writing that really stand out to me. One, the authors often use turns of phrase, idioms, common phrases, slang, whatever you want to call them that are common today but seem out of place for the mid 13th century. Not being a historian, I have no idea what common phrases were used in the time this story is set, but many of the phrases used by the authors feel out of place. The other thing that stands out to me is that the characters are pretty well learned and knowledgeable, and most of them speak multiple languages. Again, I'm not a historian, so maybe this was commonplace during this time, I don't know. It just seems kind of convenient.

    The one huge thing about this book, and most other reviewers have commented on this, is the fact that the book just stops at the end. No story lines are tied up, wrapped up, or even sufficiently put in a decent position to be paused, the book just stops. I've already started listening to book two, and as I suspected, book two basically picks up where book one left off. It seems like, and I'll have to confirm this once I start book three, that they wrote one book and for some reason or another the decision was made to cut it up in multiple books after the fact.

    Luke Daniels narration is pretty good, not great, but it is good.

    Overall I liked the story enough to move right into book two. Ultimately it's a fictional tale and in that respect it's fun and entertaining.

    2 of 3 people found this review helpful
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    Joe Sunnyvale, CA, United States 05-23-12
    Joe Sunnyvale, CA, United States 05-23-12 Member Since 2016
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    "Should not have been released yet"
    Would you try another book from the authors and/or Luke Daniels?

    maybe, once they finish the story.


    What could the authors have done to make this a more enjoyable book for you?

    This book just stops abruptly and tells us that it is the end of Book 1.


    You didn’t love this book... but did it have any redeeming qualities?

    The tale might be worth a listen. It seems to be a good start. But this is not a complete "Book".


    5 of 8 people found this review helpful
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    Mr. Fiks 05-19-17
    Mr. Fiks 05-19-17 Member Since 2013

    Gamer, father of gamers, married to a gal that puts up with us. I work a solo job and use Audible to make my day go easier.

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    "slowest book EVER"

    This is probably the slowest book I've ever listened to on Audible. I picked it up because of solid reviews and it's got authors in it that I really dig. Very not fun listen that I nearly quit more than once.

    0 of 0 people found this review helpful
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    Ali Almohsen Bahrain 07-18-16
    Ali Almohsen Bahrain 07-18-16
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    "Good Story, Too Many Characters"

    Really good story, but just way too many characters with difficult to remember names, who each played almost important roles as each other, that it was a little difficult to keep track of everyone.

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    james W Bandy II Marina Del Rey, CA United States 12-14-15
    james W Bandy II Marina Del Rey, CA United States 12-14-15 Member Since 2014
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    "Stephenson fans beware!"

    Bought this because Neal Stephenson's name was attached. I don't know how this collaboration was structured, but the writing was uniformly awful, nothing like any of his other writing I've read. Sophomoric vocabulary substitutions, awkward archaic sentence structure applied unevenly, extended minutely descriptive passages that added nothing to story, plot, or visualization of scene, to the point where I wonder if they were being paid by the word. Stephenson's reputation is built in part on his extensive research, but good research can't cover for bad writing.

    This is one of the few books I've bought without sampling the audio. Never again! While Luke Daniels is master of many character voices which are consistent over the span of the book, and there are many small parts that make short appearances widely spaced, his characterizations feel like English overdubbing of 2nd rate anime, which sadly matches the 2nd rate pulp feel of the writing here.

    I suffered to the end just to get to see if the plot would rise to some sort of satisfactory point of resolution, but it ends abruptly, like an attempt at a game of thrones episode, but not even a season, cliff hanger.

    If you want a well researched novel in a similar time frame with much better writing, more nuanced characters and plot, and a much better more fleshed out and sympathetic female supporting character, seek out Guy Gavriel Kay's Under Heaven. It's everything this book should have been. And Simon Vance is so much better as a narrator.

    0 of 0 people found this review helpful
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    Red Eagle's Legacy 05-06-15 Member Since 2012
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    "A Quest to Nowhere..."

    A while back I was listening to a podcast (I wish I could remember which one) where they were interviewing Neal Stephenson. Neal’s been one of my favorite authors since I read Snow Crash almost twenty years ago. The main material in the podcast was over his then most recent work Anathem, but what stuck out to me at the time was his interest in ancient weapons and fighting techniques. He later got together with several (many, if truth be told) authors with a similar fascination. They decided to work on a collaborative effort which involved a realistic world where many of these forgotten martial arts could be put on display in word form. Thus was birthed the first book in the Foreworld Saga: The Mongoliad.

    I’ll list all the authors since I’m sure they all want credit: Erik Bear, Greg Bear, Joseph Brassey, E. D. deBirmingham, Cooper Moo, Neal Stephenson, and Mark Teppo. They combine to tell the fairly straightforward tale in 13th century Europe and Asia. There are dual storylines in play – one in Asia where a young warrior is trying to save the Mongolian Empire from courtly corruption and one in Europe following a band of knights on their quest to kill the Khan of Khans. The tales thread back and forth throughout the book with zero overlap and without much thought to pacing. There is however quite a bit of – I’m sure fairly historical – fighting and war-making. Unfortunately all the martial prowess cannot make up for the lack of actual plot.

    The book started off slow, but picked up with some early character development. This however played out into a story that went nowhere. Half of this book is supposed to be a knightly quest, yet the heroes never went anywhere significant. The other half is supposed to deal with courtly machinations and intrigue, but only got as far as some thin innuendo. This book did have some interesting characters and seemed to set up some clever plot ideas, but ultimately the story just stops without anything coming to fruition. I’m not sure if this had to do with the multiplicity of authors or the foreknowledge of sequels to come, but typically there is some payoff at the end of a volume that makes you want to follow up. This book provided none. I have some curiosity to see what becomes of some of the characters, but probably not enough to take the time to find out.

    I have looked at the Foreworld website, and in the past couple of years, they have put out many sequels and “side-quest” stories. There must be some depth to the series, I just wish this talented group of authors could have done a better job of introducing the world to the reader. Read this only if you have time to spare.

    3.5 stars out of 10

    0 of 1 people found this review helpful
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    Trish 02-25-13
    Trish 02-25-13
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    "Absolutely Fantastic"

    What a brilliant, engaging story! Such an involved, intricate plot and the characters are just fabulous. I bought the next book as soon as I finished this one and pre-ordered the third straight after that. Just a fantastic book, I can't wait for the third!

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    Robert C. Koons Austin, TX USA 11-06-12
    Robert C. Koons Austin, TX USA 11-06-12
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    "Great story, well delivered."
    Would you consider the audio edition of The Mongoliad to be better than the print version?

    Yes.


    What other book might you compare The Mongoliad to and why?

    Tolkien's The Fellowship of the Ring. A circle of friends on an impossible mission.


    What about Luke Daniels’s performance did you like?

    Great character voices.


    Was this a book you wanted to listen to all in one sitting?

    Probably not - too long.


    0 of 1 people found this review helpful
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    Amazon Customer PHOENIX, Arizona, United States 12-13-12
    Amazon Customer PHOENIX, Arizona, United States 12-13-12 Member Since 2005
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    "Wrong genre."

    This is not literature, this is a supplemental reading to a computer game. On a brighter side, there are 'binders' and they are 'full of women.'

    2 of 5 people found this review helpful

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