The Cleopatra Cipher

Adrian West Adventures, Book 1

By: L.D. Goffigan

Narrated by: Amelia Hugh

Length: 6 hrs and 6 mins

Publisher's summary

A priceless treasure. An ancient secret society. A race against time to save countless lives....

Former FBI profiler Adrian West is in Rome for a history conference when she learns that her friend and colleague, Dr. Sebastian Rossi, has been abducted.

When another of his colleagues is found murdered, and Adrian framed for the crime, it’s a race against time to prove her innocence, find Sebastian before it's too late, and stop the secret of a powerful ancient queen from causing the loss of countless lives.

For fans of James Rollins and Dan Brown, start listening to this fast-paced thriller now!

©2022 L.D. Goffigan (P)2023 L.D. Goffigan

Very solid novel for treasure hunter fans.

It's a really good novel to listen to, ended it in 2 days, Adrian is a good character even tho not much was truly said about her.

Overall is a story that any person that likes treasure hunter/archeological stories would most likely enjoy, this is a good pick, looking forward to the next one.

Cleopatra

I really enjoyed the audio book. I'm fascinated Cleopatra and this was really I informative. it moved at a steady pace and kept you interested. There were enough twists and turns to surprise you.

didn't care for the narrator

The narrator's voicing of the characters was annoying, but the story was good. Not sure I'll listen to following stories with that narrator.

Over dramatic reading. Using voices as if it were a children’s book.

Narrator needs to not do different voices. Way over dramatic. It distracted from the story line.

Pulled me in

I received this audiobook as a gift. That said it was great. I listen to audiobooks when I workout and the narrators voice was so expressive I could easily visualize the world I’d Adrian West lives in. I felt like I joined her crew in searching for Cleopatra tomb. I enjoyed this tale so much I wanted to get the next one in the series alas it’s not out yet- so I got the book Excalibur Deception.

Highly recommend!

This was a great story, and the narration well done. Time flew by and before I knew it, the story had finished. Looking forward to more books by this author and narrator!

Suspension of Disbelief Falters

The premise of the book was splendidly adventurous, and the author puts apparently extensive research into the life of Cleopatra to excellent use. There are playful nods to the cultures present in each setting, so most of them come across as very real. The characters are very established in their roles, so first impressions remain fairly consistent throughout the novel.

Unfortunately, there are a lot of points where suspension of disbelief breaks. If any of these would annoy you, this may not be your next book to read:
1. No FBI or archaeology procedures were followed. Whether it was the protection of victim family members, the storage and examination of artifacts, victim post-recovery protocols, compartmentalization and cross-department cooperation, academic contacts between members of different countries, confrontation of armed suspects, or the analysis/investigation techniques common to both archaeology and law enforcement, there are things wrong that cannot be explained by the story situation.
2. Timeline was supremely compressed. Neither the heroes nor the villains thought anything of rushing to the scene of a dig or a dive or a documentary analysis, because of course the right message would be found immediately, the right artifact would be the first thing dug up, and there would never be any algae, silt, or coral to clear.
3. Smart, logical people repeatedly allow panic to control them. The main historian unquestioningly believes the villains who kidnapped him when they say they can kill his family, on the basis of one short video clip. The former-FBI main character allows herself to be controlled by the villain threatening to shoot a different character not once, but four or five times; if this had (bizarrely) not already been addressed by her training in the intelligence community, her former partner would have urgently discussed it with her after the first time because it was such a safety hazard for all.
4. The villains are… dumb by means of obsession. One, possibly two are so wrapped up in gender superiority that it renders them nonsensical (a “new world order” from one antique ruler’s “hire mercenaries” fund?), and another is willingly led around by his reproductive organs. This is not to say the gender and sex politics don’t happen in the underworld— they do, just, not like this.

If you can ignore these inconsistencies, or if you can recover your suspension of disbelief really fast, this is still an enjoyable book. The author opens the series in an old-fashioned way, by ensuring that all (and I do mean ALL) plot and sub-plot threads are resolved with satisfaction, then creating a scene that invites new, unspecified adventures. Given the current fad for leaving much hanging in the opening book in a new series, this is such a relief. The author also shares fiction vs. research notes in an afterword, thereby allowing the reader/listener a little deeper into the story. The pacing throughout the book was fast and continuous, so there were never any scenes that felt like they had no purpose. The conflict was very straightforward. The reader/listener can be very comfortable in cheering the heroes and despising the villains.

Thrilling listen for an afternoon.

This was an exciting story revolving around cleopatra and hidden messages if you love anything Egyptian you’ll love this listen! Very good narration also!

Entertaining

A good entertaining read. The narrator can be a little annoying at times but not unvarable. Good story.

Cheesy

I just can’t continue listening to this. The accents are terrible and it’s just tedious.