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In the face of a death-defying power, what's the "new normal"?

Like all reporters, Jack longs for a breaking story but is stuck writing obituaries for a small-town rag. As his frustration mounts, it hits him that no one has died in over three days. Jack's odd observation becomes something far stranger when he connects a meteorite to the bizarre phenomenon.

Seizing the opportunity, Jack breaks the story and after a struggle to control the meteorite's power is resolved, a swelling population begins to create havoc. With the survival of the human race hanging in the balance, politicians enact increasingly horrific measures and desperate citizens take matters into their own hands.

Jack's in a position to not just report the news, but change it, and his decisions and observations creates an epic thriller that pits the potential of human immortality against a force designed to change - or obliterate - humanity itself.

Only one man might stand in its way...the man buried in the obits department. The Final Enemy is a story of social disintegration as well as a saga of survival. Secret plans, starvation, suicide, and a series of events that spiral the human race into a desperate survival mode evolve from a seemingly singular event and leads to a fast-paced action story that delights with its penchant for the unexpected.

In the tradition of A.G. Riddle and Matthew Mather, The Final Enemy is a gripping blend of thriller and science fiction that will prove hard to put down.

©2017 Dan Petrosini (P)2018 Dan Petrosini

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It's not great!

When Jack Amato, a newly graduated reporter who writes the obituaries for his local paper, witnesses a meteor falling to earth, he thinks no more about it. That is until he realises that he hasn't had to write a single obituary since that night, not one! Thinking this is strange, he digs deeper and calls hospitals in the vicinity. He narrows it down to about a 10 mile radius that had no natural death occur since that night. He puts two and two together and gets meteor!! The meteor in question was moved and Jack finds that the route the meteor took, no natural death occurred in those places either. This is Jack's big chance and he breaks the story. It changes everyone's life forever!!!

I was drawn to this book because of the cover and the description, and I eagerly dived in when I got my copy. I have to say that I'm so bummed it didn't live up to my hopes!! I did enjoy it for the most part, but I just felt it was bogged down by some unnecessary things.

I loved the idea of the plot. A meteor falls to earth and all natural death stops. I just felt that the author didn't give us enough information on the how. The science was missing and I think if we had had more of a sense of what the meteor actually did, it would have been so much better. I also felt like the execution of the plot was lacking. I mean, once the story breaks, everyone wants exposure to the meteor and the government comply. That didn't work for me, because in my mind, I feel like the meteor would have been squirreled away by the government for testing and the public wouldn't have seen it again, or not as easy anyway.

Plus, Jack "breaks" the news that now that natural death has stopped, overpopulation is a real concern. Well, I mean, ya!! That goes without saying. There is also so much more I want to say about parts of the plot that annoyed me a little, but I can't because they are pretty big spoilers!! Suffice it to say, things happen about three quarters of the way through and people have to turn to doing something huge to survive, and there was no uproar about it at all!! There were a lot of things that the government did that got little to no reaction and it just felt unrealistic.

Now, it's not all negative, I did enjoy parts of it!! I liked that the author forwarded the time line of the story, I liked that we get to see 10 years after the meteor hit. I found the overall story compelling in a weird way, because even though I wanted to put this aside plenty of times, I was intrigued enough to keep reading!!

In all, an ok read. Very much hit or miss and I think most people will either like it or hate it!

This seems to be Joseph Kidawskis first book as a narrator and it showed. He did have a few tones and voices for the characters, but the overall enthusiasm for the book was lacking. He didn't capture the atmosphere of the story enough to truly bring it to life. I also found the quality of the production wasn't as clear as it should be.

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The ladies need to step up

Imagine Jack Amato as a older, boring, arrogant Peter Parker who never got bit by a crazy spider and became a super hero. I never really warmed up to Jack and he plays center stage for the entire story. He wants to be an investigative reporter but mostly he has contacts where he wheedles info out of people, through begging or guilt trips. I also simply found him boring. I don’t have to like the main character to find them interesting and get into their story (like in Brave New World, Wuthering Heights, or Breaking Bad).

The main premise of the story held promise. A mysterious meteorite has crashed into the Earth and it has a very fascinating power: it grants immortality to most humans. You can still be murdered or die in an accident and there are a few medical conditions it can’t cure. So initially, there’s the breaking of the story and figuring this out. Then we have the sharing of the meteorite so all can benefit. Finally, what happens to the world if the population greatly increases because birth rates remain the same but death rates greatly drop off. Yet there was very little science and I do love my science in my science fiction. What little science bits were included made me cringe. As a biologist, I felt the author was just tossing some genetics terms in there without really understanding what they meant.

The setting was very one dimensional. This story takes place in the later half of the 21st century. Initially, there’s a few remarks about self-driving cars and other tech but we never have any examples. Honestly, this story could take place in the 1980s since the future tech had no role in this story.

All the decisions are made by male characters. Laura (Jack’s girlfriend) and Jack’s granma are the two recurring female characters. They are there to provide support and not much else. Laura initially has her own life but that is quickly minimized. In fact, there’s a scene where Laura is talking with Jack where she tells him she doesn’t want to be eclipsed by him. That gave me a chuckle because that happened several chapters back.

My favorite parts of the story were all the different ways the US government attempted to keep everyone fed. Some of these were pretty straight forward, like limiting the number of births, while others were more radical (and therefore more interesting). There’s also little snippets about how other countries are handling this unexpected world tragedy. I did feel that the tale left some big ideas out such as what people would grow at home to supplement their diet (anything from veggies to mushrooms to insects).

All together, the story has an interesting underlying backbone but it was clumsily executed. The characters were one dimensional and boring. I wanted more science but would have been satisfied with awesome characters had they been there. The story does leave us on a cliffhanger with possible hope hanging ready for Book 2. 3.5/5 stars.

The Narration: Joseph Kidawski was a good pick for the voice of Jack Amato. He sounds like a corn-fed midwestern reporter and he did a decent job of putting emotion into Jack’s voice. His female character voices were feminine and all his characters were distinct. There were a few times where a sentence or two were repeated. Twice I noticed a slight change in volume. 4/5 stars.

I received this audiobook as part of my participation in a blog tour with Audiobookworm Promotions. The tour is being sponsored by Dan Petrosini. The gifting of this audiobook did not affect my opinion of it.

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Not dying is a dream come true! Or your nightmare

What happens when a space rock hits earth? A young reporter figures out that people stop dying from natural causes. This reporter follows what happens on earth as a result of this. Very real problems soon start as the Earth can no longer sustain itself. This author creates a future world timeline in which this happens and writes a very realistic story to show how horrible everything could get. This excellent book gave me the SHIVERS as I listened to a horrible, very possible future.

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Solid dystopian endeavor!

Any additional comments?

I listened to The Final Enemy, narrated by Joseph Kidawski on audible. This is a dystopian style story with a twist. Petrosini takes a genre and turns it on its head in this novel. Normally the reader is faced with 2 dystopian style scenarios, 1)post apocalyptic where we encounter a world in which the catastrophe has already occurred, or 2)the books takes you through some time of world change where the catastrophe develops in course of the story and it most frequently is caused by some major terrible event.

In the Final Enemy, Petrosini starts by guiding the reader through an amazing break through. Life is preserved! The final enemy, or death is conquered by the appearance of some healing properties that accompany the arrival of a meteorite hitting North America. The author explores fabulously, what would happen if people no longer died. Wouldn't that be amazing? Well maybe not. There are other implications that come along with that scenario and what may seem great ultimately may not be. Be careful what you wish for.

Petrosini did a very good job at surprising me with a twist on this type of story. Unintentionally, I recently explored another dystopian style novel so my brain was beginning to work along certain guidelines. This book was the better in story and style. His characters were relatable and believable. The only downside was that I felt like there were some jumpy transitions and a couple of updates in the timeline that seemed very similar to previous ones. Other than these elements I enjoyed this book very much.

Kidawski did a good job narrating. His regular reading voice is clear and pleasant and his character voices were smooth enough to not sound forced. The only exception was grandma's and it was cringe worthy. But overall 4/5 for his part.

I received this edition in exchange for an unbiased review.

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Decent

This story is about a reporter who finds a meteorite that has some unique powers. People stop dying of natural causes which leads to over population. I won't give anymore away.

The story in many ways is frighteningly realistic yet at the same time its not such as animals over populating and humans starving. If there are too many animals why are humans starving and ating each other? That didn't make any sense to me

The story is easy to follow and pretty gory in parts. I liked the main character. He's a pretty normal guy. He thought he had something good and he did but it led to something horrible and at the same time it made his career.

The narrator did a good job. His voice was wasy to follow and easy on my ears.

Overall, a good story and different.

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Good premises but poor execution

Jack is a reporter in a small town, and has the opportunity of his life by witnessing the fall of a special meteorite. In charge of obituaries, Jack soon realizes that this meteorite might be related to the absence of deaths in the last days. His suspicions are soon confirmed, and the world has to adapt to this drastic change.

The premises of this story were quite interesting although, more than science-fiction, this book was about politics facing overpopulation. This made it a bit dystopian, and it was interesting to explore how far one government can go in order to keep the balance.

I found a few issues though, like the really slow buildup. The first third of the book retold again and again how the meteorite was transported here and there and how Jack followed and kept investigating deaths, or lack thereof.

I think the story would have worked better with further character development. I had difficulties connecting to the characters and, while I understood their motivations, I didn't care much for them.

I was a bit bothered by the fact that this meteorite was often mentioned as sent from God. I understand that religion is deeply ingrained in the American people but, as an atheist, I tend to dislike sci-fi and religion mixed together.

I would say that Joseph Kidawski's narration was okay. There were no great issues, but it could have been better. There was more reverberation than usual, and this is something that we mostly find among new narrators. Checking Kidawski's Audible page, I see that this is his first audiobook, and this explains it. I also had issues with the characters' voices. Some of them sounded the same (like Jack and his girlfriend, for instance), but for others I think he overdid it. I also have to mention that the first time 'Sheffield' is mentioned it is wrongly pronounced, putting the emphasis on the last syllable, while the next times it is correct. There are some noticeable audio edits and in some cases the pause between paragraphs is too short. Working on these little things will really help Kidawski in delivering a professional narration.

I received this audiobook as part of my participation in a blog tour with Audiobookworm Promotions. The tour is being sponsored by Dan Petrosini. The gifting of this audiobook did not affect my opinion of it.

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  • TU
  • 03-05-18

A solid sci fi / thriller

I was given this free review copy audio book at my request and have voluntarily left this review.

This was actually a pretty decent sci fi / thriller. Some parts of the story requires you to suspend disbelief and just enjoy, but if you can, you'll enjoy it. The narration is decent. Not the best narrator I've heard, but good enough to not detract from the experience.

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  • Dawn H
  • Baxter Springs, KS
  • 03-05-18

Something to think about

I received this audiobook as part of my participation in a blog tour with Audiobookworm Promotions. The tour is being sponsored by Dan Petrosini. The gifting of this audiobook did not affect my opinion of it.

Many people want to live forever but have they really thought that through? Dan Petrosini has, and The Final Enemy shows that maybe living forever wouldn't be as great as you might think. With no one dying from natural causes, suddenly the world population would grow faster than ever before. Where would all of those people live? More importantly, what would happen when they can't all be fed?

Some of the things that the US government does in The Final Enemy is unthinkable, at least right now. But when people start dying of starvation, how far would we be willing to go? I'm glad we don't have to find out, at least not in my lifetime. 

This is good science fiction with just a shade of Soylent Green and a lot of politics and the breakdown of society. The main character, Jack, is a good reporter but will he be willing to give up integrity in order to avoid starvation?

The narrator does a good job with timing and pacing. There were a lot of male voices and they would have been difficult to distinguish, but he always included who was talking which helped.

I definitely recommend The Final Enemy. It's good fiction that will give you something to think about.

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An Interesting Concept

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For many, many years, scientists and science fiction writers have contemplated the dire consequences of severe overpopulation and I doubt that there are many people in the industrialized world who haven’t had at least passing thoughts about it. It’s a fascinating topic with few really viable solutions other than those that most would view as draconian and repugnant and I was interested to see how Mr. Petrosini would handle such a scenario.

While the topic and parts of the storyline are compelling, the execution is somewhat clumsy with moments that are too illogical to sustain. Just as an example, there is no way the government wouldn’t have known about this meteorite with all the available space-searching that goes on and they would have been hot on Jack’s heels if not there first. Also, Jack’s rapid rise to “stardom”, pun intended, makes very little sense as do some of the decisions made by the government, especially regarding sharing the meteorite’s effects.

On the other hand, the narrator, Joseph Kidawski, made this a very entertaining story just with his performance. There are many voiceover actors who do characters well but he truly manages to make each and every person sound different, with vivid intonations and accents. There were a few issues with the audiobook production, such as missing the beginnings of some chapters, but Mr. Kidawski turned this into an appealing book.

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A very fascinating book

3.5 - 3.75 stars

I loved the concept for this book and found it quite unique. The sound quality wasn't the greatest but not too bad. The narrator has some good qualities, although inconsistent in some areas. Overall it was entertaining.

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  • MANI
  • 04-22-18

The final Enemy

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This audiobook is a very fast read and good plot. Thought the dialogue was natural and believable. It was a thought provoking exploration of what would happen if we all lived forever.

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  • C. Rowlands
  • 03-01-18

The downsides of immortality

The final enemy is the story of a meteor falling to earth that causes people to stop dying from natural causes and the unexpected downsides that come from this 'gift', it is predominantly told from the perspective of an initially young reporter called Jack Amato. He witnessed the initial impact and his role as obituary writer for a local Iowa newspaper helped him to be the first to spot the effects it was having on humanity.

The book makes frequent time jumps forwards from the initial impact, to when it was still considered to be a blessing and then onwards as the negative implications of an ever increasing population become more and more dire. Some of the stages of progression in the problems seemed quite outlandish, but others were very plausible and made those parts of the book much more compelling.

The narrator of the book did a good job with the main characters and the general narration of the story, but some of the secondary characters such as Jack's grandmother had needlessly over the top vocal performances that were a little jarring and detracted from the overall performance.

Overall this was an enjoyable premise for a book with a good performance.

[Note - I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.]

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  • Tony Bough
  • 02-27-18

Wow this was amazing whilst also terrifying!

Firstly wow. It's incredible. It starts at a really relaxed pace. Not slow but just sort of building. A curious guy in the right place putting a jigsaw together although granted a smart guy to do it. It's nice to have a story where the reporter isn't a bad guy with dodgy morals or twisted in some way.

I really enjoyed it from start to finish. Really good pace to the book and the narration is excellent.

It is however terrifying. It feels so real. Like this could be the way that the world, that the government react to the cessation of death and overpopulation. They are inept, self-serving and all corrupt. The things that happen to the characters as the story spirals out of control also feel real. Which is what's so scary because if you get this book and you should then there are some really messed up things that people get bought into.

I once read that MI5’s (Britains security agency) has a statement that society is “four meals away from anarchy”. Or to put some flesh on that they believe that Britain could be quickly reduced to large-scale disorder maybe even rioting and looting in the event that the supply of food stops. Well we certainly see that here with the morals.

I also like how everyone's morality becomes sightly more flexible once they are immortal and then with time they slip further and further. One little evil makes the next so much easier.

Really good!

This book was given to me for free at my request and I provided this voluntary review.

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  • Rayc
  • 02-14-18

Totally Engrossing

Wow, This book grabs you and keeps you. I wanted to listen in one sitting (couldn't) so found myself plugging in whenever there was opportunity.
This is a work of fiction at present! But if a meteor with Remedies effect ever struck earth, then this book is a very accurate prediction of the results.
The writing is (I believe) a true representation of humanity or lack of it in survival situations. Public outrage then acceptance of Government new laws and rules.

Characters feel real and have depth, both heroes and villains.

I loved this book and whole heartedly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this audio book and voluntarily leave this review

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  • Rob Cooke
  • 02-09-18

A powerful story that stays with you!

This book is incredibly well written and researched.

It is a hypothetical look at the cessation of death on the planet.
A truly frank and reflective look at how humanity may deal with such a phenomenon if it were to happen.
The story has good characters that give you mind to real world figures. There struggles with the decisions that each and every individual must make in order to deal with the new reality. The government implements measures that when thought about would be logical if still questionable given the series of events.

The narration is powerful and helps lead you through the story while conveying sentiment and importance throughout.

In summation this book is a very true reflection of the world at large and the human need to survive at any cost. It is a blend of science fiction, post apocalyptic and thriller.