Talyn: Rebirth

Talyn's Saga, Book 1

By: Benjamin Medrano

Narrated by: Tess Irondale

Death isn't the end.

Marie didn't expect to be given the opportunity to go to a new universe when she died, but when it was offered she held to the offer with all her might.

Taking the name of Talyn, she was accompanied to the new world by the goddess Melody as her assistant, as she seeks out a more rewarding life for herself, no matter what challenges may stand before her.

Even if the introduction of some game mechanics and a goddess to her life has unanticipated consequences.

This is a slow-burn story, with more slice of life sections to it. While it is LitRPG, there are no attributes to speak of.

©2022 Benjamin Medrano (P)2022 Podium Audio

smooth narrative

slow build like I like but lots of super high level characters to show how far she can go.

it started so good, ended so bad

most of the story was your standard lit RPG some ones soul goes to a new world blah blah. nothing bad, nothing great, kinda slow. then you get to end end of the book. some ppl decide to rob the MC, the MC says no. so they try to kill the MC. MC runs away, and cleverly leads the bandits into a monster. now considering this is a negative response you can guess what happens next. The MC decides to hero up and go back and save them from the monster. at this point I stopped listening out of pure disgust.

good book

I want more talyn her story is awesome and attention grabbing and the actors and actresses do a great job and give the characters great personalitys

will keep reading

not the greatest setup. I like the MC. she is flawed and not OP but likeable too. side characters are interesting too.
the writing is not GREAT but ok and the pacing is pretty good. there isn't a lot of information on the development of her skills which is bothersome but I'm hopeful for improvement as the series progresses.
the significantly higher rating of the rest of the books from others makes me think the writer made significant efforts toward improvement as they went along.

considering the title, I thought there would be more literotica

overall it's decent with RPG. I was hoping for some actual erotica with it, considering the premise is that she's a succubus. events happen once but there are no scenes for it. it's fade to Black