[Psychokinetic] Eyeball Pulling

A LitRPG Apocalypse Adventure ([Psychokinetic] Eyeball Pulling, Book 1)

By: FreeID

Narrated by: Amanda Dolan

There is no weapon more powerful than the [Psychokinetic] mind.

Astrid, a mischievous noble teen, long dreamed of exploring the ancient cities preserved beneath the waves, left behind from a time before the ocean swallowed the world. She's been training all her life to become a magic swordsman capable of doing just that.

But when an ancient monster long thought dead assaults humanity's last bastion–a floating ship-city–she awakens her System early.

Only, she's not a warrior as expected. She's forced to walk the path of a [Psychokinetic] Mage.

With Spawn-infested oceans, pirates looking to plunder, and mysterious monsters that lurk within Bubbled-Cites at the bottom of the ocean, Safety is anything but guaranteed.

She’ll learn levitation, object throwing, eyeball pulling, and more, all the way to the apex of psychic powers.

But, what happens when she discovers that her world was a lot larger than she–and the rest of humanity, once thought?

Don't miss the start of this action-packed and often hilarious LitRPG Apocalypse series about a young survivor with a craving for adventure and fighting. Perfect for fans of Azarinth Healer and Eight.

About the series: Astrid wasn't expecting to awaken as a mage class, but that won't stop her from having fun. In fact, she'll no longer need to resort to laborious activities, including, but not limited to; picking up stuff, carrying stuff, or even throwing stuff. Everything can be done with her mind!

©2023 FreeID (P)2023 Recorded Books

Love it

Delightful and I loved how fast and action packed this book was. Sometimes a normal pace, other times wild and action packed, never slow.

The pacing feels really off

seems like the author wanted to get right into the meat of the story with the minimum amount of explanation or any depth. the storys pretty good, but I struggled to get through the book

Good fun, annoyingly abrupt ending.

Great book, excellent narration. Wonderful character and world development. The ending nearly ruined the whole book with its abruptness. If it had a better written and more conclusive ending, it would get 4 stars for story.

The pauses ruined it

The story is actually very entertaining. It’s the pauses in narration that drag you out of the story and make it difficult to enjoy the book.

Well, I want more

Very enjoying a story and The world building is interesting

I can’t wait for more

The long pauses are the largest issue

Good first book that left off at a good spot. The MC is OP for her level from day one and her progression is fast. Largest issue with the actual story is the lack of information on how the classes work. Like when the MC reviews her stat screen there is some info that I don't understand and it's never explained. I'm still not sure if that was due to a lack of knowledge within the world or an oversight by the author or what the deal is. It also does not take away from the story in a meaningful way.

The narration was good but not great. There were too many long pauses within a chapter that made things kind of annoying. It's like you think "oh the chapter is ending here?" or " is there going to be a perspective change?" and then the dialogue or internal monologue continues like nothing happened. It's jarring but not enough to ruin the story. A little editing finesse in post would fix this right up. So please do that for book 2!

I'm definitely looking forward to book 2.

LitRPG Waterworld - with Bursting Eyeballs!

The story is overall pretty good, with humanity's bitter struggle for survival being a theme I always enjoy. I wasn't entirely thrilled with the snobbish, entitled princess attitude, but with a bit of a twist in the story with a certain skill, I was utterly thrilled with her more annoying emotional traits. I'm excited about the sequel, and can't wait to see all the new ways the MC uses her telekinesis (psychokinetic) powers.

Fun read and mystery

While I'll agree the audio narrating was a bit bad with the pauses, that's not the narrator or authors fault.

As for the story, it can be abrupt with the MC being very decisive at time and doing things. On a whole its enjoyable. Thay stat screen with upper and main, mid class also is confusing in the start as it wasnt explained when she read her status. Maybe in book format it makes more sense.


With her able to control matter, my main wonder is if shes going to learn to turn water into air or matter. What if she gets so strong she can turn the flooded ocean back into dirt or something denser in matter than water to compact it. Like make all the water into a huge moutian of mithril. Surely the water to mithril ratio would make all the oceans compact matter into a mithril mountain or mountain chain.

Imagine her so powerful she can go to the shore of a mountain and turn say, 5 miles of water to stone or iron. Then just constantly converts that spot over and over for a year or two. Bet she could fill in the land and lower the ocean level dramatically. By putting it on the mountain out of the water, she wouldn't have to worry about water displacement.

Fine

The audio and production quality are what save this book.

There are parts of the story that defy belief. An example from the beginning of the book: The hospital is supposed to be a safety fallback position, it's got a reinforced door, the windows are not reinforced. I agree with other reviews about the scenes feeling a little forced at times.

Fun pacing

If you are into progression fantasy, and dont like series with a slow burn strength increase, than i believe you’ll like this book. I definitely think it picks up more and more the further you get into it.