This Young Master Omnibus: Books 1-3

Plus Bonus Story: This Clone Is a Protagonist’s Master

De: D.C. Haenlien

Narrado por: Ronnie Rowlands, Tiffany Suzuki, Hannah Schooner, Giancarlo Herrera

A cultivation fantasy published in light novel style with black and white illustrations.

On the surface, Xi Tianyi was the only son of Sword Empress Xi of the Buzhou Immortal Sect, the number one expert in the Huang Realm. His birth was noble, his status exalted. But the truth was that Xi Tianyi was actually a reincarnated man from a world known as Earth.

On Earth, he was no one special, but with his new life, Xi Tianyi aims to reign invincible: past, present, and future. Among his goals was to travel back to Earth and reunite with his family.

However, as Xi Tianyi proceeds further on his Immortal path, he discovers that rather than the protagonist, why does he seem more like the cannon fodder villain?

©2024 D.C. Haenlien (P)2024 Royal Guard Publishing LLC

Always a sucker for a good cultivation story

I am very biased I always love these story. But I will admire there is a small lack of a real plot. It’s a fun story and I’ll continue any future book, but there is just something about it. The MC progresses but there is no story just someone’s life being told which I like but I see why other won’t. Overall 9/10 will love to see more great work

DNF B1 C20, I just found it to be boring

Overall, I just lacked any interest in continuing, I considered finishing the first book but decided it was a waste of time.

It’s just a training montage book

I’m eight hours in and the only thing happened is training. There is little main story. just a bunch of side Quests. The author throws around different terms for the same Realms. So if you’re not extremely familiar with it, it’s hard to follow along. I never went to Google so many times to stay focused with A book. I must’ve heard what realm somebody is in like 400 times I might be exaggerating, but it doesn’t feel like it. When is the story gonna start? Stop training!

Ronnie is a fantastic narrator. Edit.: he starts laughing in the second book. He needs to work on that.
Tiffany has a lot of work to do. She has one way of speaking and it is gal speak. Slightly annoying. She can change her voice to young middle-aged annd old and that’s it.

Edit: two hours into the second book. It’s really boring. I’m done.

Feels like a bad translation.

I tend to use long slow books as sleeping aids. This book is long and slow. Unfortunately it is also badly repetitive. Stating the same concepts, sometimes with almost the same wording, repeatedly in the same few minutes. The author regularly uses the incorrect word when trying to convey meaning. In some cases using the opposite of what it appears intended to convey.

Finally, and what made me drop the book in the end, no one seems to have listened through the recording to check for errors. Mispronounced words abound, as well as the reader simply flubbing lines. This happens frequently and consistently enough to keep me awake with mild irritation.

Ultimately this book needs a good editor to excise redundancy, a decent proofreader, and a producer who cares about the book.

The bonus story at the end is better.

The bonus story was way more interesting. The whole story is of an mc who gets everything handed to him. Apparently he is a clone of some dragon emperor soul and when he died he broke his soul into fragments so he could reincarnate. The protagonist being one of these fragment clones gets the emperor's cultivation technique making it really easy for him to cultivate from there the story takes a commical approach at times having someone less than 20 years old being a high cultivation than older people. At times the content is dark like the last book with some privileged character, who is related to a sect elder who peels faces and rapes his victims and kills them. Even that wasnt all that interesting. The series jumps alot from one thing to the next, its almost like the story had no real direction other than the sect life of some privilaged special cultivator with standards. Personaly spare yourself the time and the boredom.