Servant of the Crown

Heir to the Crown, Book 1

By: Paul J Bennett

Narrated by: Greg Patmore

Length: 12 hrs and 20 mins

Publisher's summary

An old warrior, too stubborn to die. A royal heir, hidden at birth. Can they save a realm on the brink of war?

Tragedy tears Gerald's world apart, and only his unwavering loyalty to the Baron of Bodden saves him. After serving as a soldier for years, a single act of self-sacrifice thrusts his future into the world of politics. Cut off from all he knows, he becomes no more than a pawn to those in command.

Banished with little more than the clothes on his back, he seeks a new purpose, for what is a warrior who has nothing left to fight for?

A fateful meeting with another lost soul unmasks a shocking secret, compelling him to take up the mantle of guardian. Bandits, the Black Hand, and even the King, he battles them all for the future of the realm.

Memories of the past, secrets that shape the future; his adventure is only the beginning.

Servant of the Crown is the first audiobook in the medieval Heir to the Crown fantasy series. If you like gripping fight scenes, compelling characters, and a captivating story, then you will love Paul J Bennett's tale of a warrior who refuses to retreat.

©2018 Paul J Bennett (P)2019 W. F. Howes Ltd

Enjoyable medieval fantasy

Servant of the Crown, Heir to the Crown, Book 1
Great introduction to this series. Gerald Matheson is the Servant of the Crown. Simply written, easy read, easy listen. In the first quarter of the book we are introduced to significant events in the first forty years of Gerald's life. When the wounded soldier is sent to work as the grounds keeper at the Royal Estate at Uxley he befriends Anna, a lonely 6 year old girl. Hidden from public view since birth and rumoured to be deformed, Anna is the unwanted youngest daughter of the Queen. Anna is fair and her paternity is in question, albeit the King acknowledges her as a daughter. The majority of this story meanders through the next seven years of their life at Uxley. Anna is uncannily clever for a child. When an Elf and a Dwarf are introduced, the story moves into fantasy.

This is a linear narrative, without a POV, suitable for teens (although there is a rape and murder). There isn't a clear plot line. No sense of urgency or impending doom until the end when the knight Dame Beverley delivers news that Merceria has been invaded. Then the story stops. Anna has just turned 13 years. Not a true cliff-hanger and you could stop here. I will continue this fantasy saga as in Sword of the Crown, a stand alone, we learn more about Dame Beverly Fitzwilliam.

I love the narration by Greg Patmore. The characterisations are great. Gerald is as I imagine. My only gripe is that Anna doesn't sound childlike in the early stages. I'm not sure how Greg could mature her vocally and keep Anna identifiable as Anna.

Character dynamic

I downloaded this on a whim and genuinely enjoyed it! The story and voice acting are engaging with a sweet dynamic between the two main characters.

Charming

Love this book and the performance! The performance was really "warm" and the focus was on unlikely friendships.

Awesome

I totally loved reading this book a d the Audible rendition was excellent. The voice of Gerald was just as I expected and Anna was pretty close too. This story drew me into the world of Mercia and totally enthralled me. The world building is top notch and all the characters are completely different and totally enjoyable. Grab yourself a copy and curl up in your favourite reading spot with your favourite beverage and lose yourself in a fabulous series. Highly recommended.

Beautiful done.

Once in a while i get a pleasent suprise when selecting new authors in the fantasy genere. This book starts of in the media res style, we get a breif look into the background of the main char. IT could ve been deeper but is sufficient. Then comes back to where the story started, the drive in the story is pleasant. There Are some weaknesses like when the main characters go to the slum. Seems like the sergant doesnt understand the dangers in the slum. But its not a showstopper.
The narrator is good,

Recommended if you are a bit tired of fantastical hero stories.

Not a fantasy book

This book was very well written and very much like old classic literature were not a lot happens but the characters and descriptions are very rich. I would not classify this book as a fantasy as there is one elf storekeeper and the only magic is when the MC is healed once. It was still worth listening to but I will not be continuing the series.

Good story

A full cast audio drama would be cool. Although the narration is decent. It’s tough doing all the voices.

Unpolished, but fantastic story.

This book takes a great deal of time building the main characters. The odd thing about that is, it missed a huge opportunity in the beginning of the book to do so. The main character (Gerald) is introduced at a very young age and in about two chapters he’s a man. His entire youth is skipped in the book. Huge missed opportunity to bring leaders closer to an easy character to love.

The book kind of rambles on randomly with several chapters that appear to have no real meaning or point other than character building. But, it’s incredibly entertaining.

This is the first book I’ve listened to by this narrator. His voice is amazing and makes you feel like you’re truly in the story. I’ll need to listen to other books from this narrator because it may just be that he saved the book.

Love to hear more from this author as his skills progress.

Not quite what I expected.

I chose this book because it was said it was a mix of historical and epic fantasy and so I thought it must be an excellent story. It's not, or at least I'm unsure if it is. This story, sort of grows on you. It's a slow start, but picks up a little as you get into it. Don't expect high adventure, epic battle scenes or emotional trauma related to challenges of a hard earned deed accomplished. It is very linear, and almost sedate, not a lot of world building, and the characters are nice enough but not very deep. It's not a bad story, and the narration is excellent! I will continue on with the story, to see where it leads, not because I'm emotionally invested in the characters.

Fact or Fantasy

This book had me checking facts about merry old England. It wasn't until our heroin met an Elf that I knew something was up. I love historical fiction but the realism in this fantasy had me hooked and I was listening during all my work breaks. The narrator , Greg Patmore, did a superb job and the imagination of the author is quite superb. I am looking for the next book.