Betrayal. Ambition. Violence. Magic. Stranded in a winter wilderness, a young girl fights to survive after the massacre of her family. Her motto is simple: Always create opportunity. It's not long before she runs into an old friend, but can she trust him? This majestic fantasy short story defies cliché and stirs the soul.
Would you try another book from Wendy Fisher and/or J.S. Arquin?
Seems like an interesting concept
How would you have changed the story to make it more enjoyable?
Flesh out some of the ideas.
Any additional comments?
It makes for an interesting short story, but some of the motivations for characters aren't made clear enough for them to make sense. I think it's still worth a read, though.