To many times has the Nadal Republic and the Amazon Nation seen each other on the field of battle. Now that King Bernal Koff has taken the throne he will use every weapon in his arsenal to destroy his enemy. In his way is Sovereign Galashin Mathis, and she will do everything she can to stop him. So now with their conflict looming time will tell if her kingdom will rise, or if King Bernal Koff's vast domain will ascend.
I think it flows well, and I think people will enjoy the fights scenes and the expression that the narrator give to the story. I think the reader will look forward to the next installment.