Mark of the Crijik 5: The Ascension

A LitRPG Adventure

De: ThinkTwice

Narrado por: Neil Hellegers

Andross Silver’s secret has been revealed to the world. An eighth Marked one, born before his predecessor has passed away.

Peace and destruction have fluctuated with the appearance of every new Divine, causing humanity to tense, and strain, but never to break. Andross, however, is a new factor. One that others fear can shatter that balance. Unprecedented, his presence heralds chaos and begets destruction.

With the eyes of the world on him, Andross prepares for the Descent, a ceremony where he will unveil himself to the eyes of the world. But his existence isn't the only world-shaking event on the horizon. Inné, Marked one of the divine of war, will ascend in less than a year, and the invitation he extends to Andross isn’t one that the newest Marked can refuse.

As the powers that be await with bated breath to see what Andross’ next move will be, Inné’s Ascension looms on the horizon, and it threatens to bring down the entire world in its wake.

Book 5 of an Isekai LitRPG Adventure about an unexpected hero coming of age in his new home, progressing in power and abilities as he unlocks the secrets of magic and a System that may not be as trustworthy as it seems.

©2024 Aethon Books (P)2024 Aethon Audio

please stop the kidnapping stick

this is your fifth book and you've done the kidnapping thing in three out of the five bucks it was already old. we did in the first book. your story is decent, but honestly I don't think I can stomach another book with kidnapping again. please find something else to move your story along. this is getting old. it's already old other than that, there are a few other things you did figure kind of not the best. there are many ways you could have moved the story forward, but the story itself was enjoyable minus the kidnapping and the actions taken towards the end also could have been better. but on a whole other than those two things, I enjoyed the The majority of the story.

Good Listen

I hope the author will stop saying every single level that has increasingmultiple levels at one time. Just tell me the initial and final level please.

Forced plot and cliffhanger.

This book was different the the others. The world was expanded but also changed. The system changed(leveling up abilities) a little got even more useless then the other books and I don't know why it even exists anymore. The plot is railroaded to progress in a very specific way that leaves out so many ways out of situations that the author blatantly ignores. I feel like the ending was made before the beginning and the author connected the two in the clumsiest way yet. This was a problem in previous books, but this one cranks it up to 11. The ending is a cliffhanger and very, very cliché. It felt like a death by a thousand cuts with all the little things that got to me building up to the cliffhanger ending.

too much crap

Have you ever listened to your own audio book? do you think skipping skill upgrades by 3's is good enough? Try skill goes from 2 up to 9 instead of skill 2 to 3, skill 3 to 4, skill 4 to 5... skill 7 to skill 8, skill 8 to 9. Looks really dumb when laid out like this huh?

Additionally, trim your battle sequences because they are not entertaining, they are annoying.

I may read/listen to this series because it is 1 of hundreds i follow, but I would NEVER recommend this series, nor will I rate it high.

Plus the vague logic of " oh, I need to be betters i will just make stuff up and suddenly I can overcome this situation' is so pathetic made even worse that it makes no sense outside of what you think it means.

I am not a troll, I am telling you what is wrong with your writing. Learn from it or suffer in mediocrity.