Water Flower

A LitRPG Adventure (The Undying Immortal System Book 2)

Life is the teacher. Death is the lesson. An undying cultivator is the result.

Su Fang’s path of cultivation is a journey of countless deaths. As each new life pulls back the veil that covers the Nine Rivers Continent, he discovers both hidden truths and the chains that bind him.

The Nine Rivers Continent is under the thumb of a godlike entity willing to do whatever it takes to push society forward, and nothing fuels progress like conflict. To get his first true competitive advantage, Su Fang begins his hunt for a spatial fire seed, a treasure that will grant him the power to create a world of his own—a sanctuary beyond the reach of the Heavenly Dao. Fortunately—or perhaps unfortunately—he has as many attempts as he needs to succeed.

A cultivator who defies death has only one option: seek out a life worth living.

©2025 Greg Tolley (P)2025 Mountaindale Press

Conflicted

It is a solid series. Only real annoyance is MCs lack of asking the system for things like understanding soul manuals at level 1 since a shitton of the MCs worries seem to revolve around soul strength. Otherwise it is a good series with solid progression. I just wish it wasn't such a neverending series of self fulfilling "everything sucks in the end and I am alone"

Around and around and around again

Great continuation of the time loop series. I really appreciate the way the character is affected by some of the ongoing time loop stress.

The detail without droning like a lecture hall professor.

The story progressed with no apparent barriers like over explaining the details. Overall, it was entertaining and left me with wanting to know what will happen next.

MC irritated me

I was expecting somewhat similar pacing to the first book. Instead it felt 3 times slower. The main character continues to irritate me with his decision making skills, priorities, and social intelligence. Progress felt non existent for the first half of the book and only inched forward in the second half. "A regressor's Tale of Cultivation" seems to have given me an unreasonable expectation for these types of stories.

Great but Emotional

The first part of the book was great and the second half got real emotional, but I liked it overall.