Messy Strokes

An Enemies-to-Lovers, Single Parent Romance (Wrecked Roommates)

By: Kelsie Rae

Narrated by: Lucie White

Length: 9 hrs and 55 mins

Publisher's summary

I should’ve told Milo.
That I loved him.
That I was pregnant.
That I didn’t want anyone else, except him.
But I didn’t.
Instead, I left.
I ran.
Now he’s here, in the hospital after I delivered a baby girl he’s convinced belongs to him.
But the truth is, I have no idea.
I’ve sacrificed so much to keep my past hidden. To keep my baby safe from her other potential father.
It’s a secret I’ll take to my grave.
Or at least, I planned to until Milo forced me to move in with him, causing me and my daughter to pop up on a certain someone’s radar, whom I never wanted to see again.
People might say life gets messy sometimes....
But they have no idea just how much chaos will ensue if the truth comes out, after I’ve done so much to keep it in the past.

©2021 Kelsie Farmer (P)2021 Kelsie Farmer

love this book

I am loving this book. But as someone that got pregnant with a guy when all we were doing was having fun and both planning to go our separate ways, I'm not going to lie Mads not telling Milo Everything after being given so many opportunities to do so no matter what, is making me very very mad. He is going to find out at some point, it's inevitable. But all this heart ache and guilt would be fixed so fast if she just told him the truth and got another test done. 🙄

Bad recording

I enjoyed the book but you can hear the cuts and the mess ups. It’s not a good recorded audiobook, I enjoyed the overall story though. Just the recording turned me off of it

There’s a glitch that needs to be fixed

The end of chapter 27 is completely cut off. It ends in the middle of a sentence. Besides that I couldn’t get enough of this book!

Dragged on a little

Parts of it drug on and were frustrating but overall was a great story. The narrator’s male voices were a little weird.

Could have been better

If you can get through the poor narration choice and immaturity level of M then yea it’s a good book. However, the narrator was not the correct pick IMO, she was monotone and low when doing any male parts. She was obnoxious and screechy when narrating the story and female characters. They asked why about 500 times like children do 🤦🏻‍♀️
Overlooking all of that and ya get a story that could have been about 10 chapters shorter

Good book, but had a hard time hearing the person talk

For the actual book, it kept me on my toes and excited. But the back and forth with Milo was just a little repetitive but I guess that’s just his character. The voiceover for this one was a bit rough. One of the chapters completely cut off, there were some awkwardly placed pauses, and my main issue: I had an extremely hard time hearing her for more than half the book when she voiced Milo. I had to turn it up a lot when Milo would talk and then as soon as it returned to Maddy, I had to turn it back down because it returned to a normal volume. This is the only review I’ve done so I hope this makes sense. Good book but the recording needs revision.

Good but needs editing

I enjoyed the story. I'm not sure if the narrator is just starting out but definitely needs to work on her male voices. There is a need for some editing. There was a chapter that was completely cut off at the end and words in the audio that didn't fit. These audio books are not cheap, so I expect more from editing.

Issue

Chapter 28 plays chapter 38… so chapter 28is missing 😩 the rest of the story line is good I just feel like I missed a big chunk of what’s going on and now it’s hard to follow trying to piece together what I missed.

Enjoyable

As much as I loved this book, the beginning was hard to read for me. Both characters made stupid decisions that hurt to read.

Through this story, Madelyn made me upset with the way she went about things. But Milo made me love him.
These two do not have an easy story. It is MESSY! But I loved reading their HEA, no matter how hard it was in the beginning.

I don't want to give anything away in my review, so I will say this is definitely a great listen, and the story is worth it!

A must read!

Hot with sexual tension peppered with a sweetness. Don't hesitate. I'm sad it's over and hope she does a sequel.