Abandoned: Arrivals and Awakenings

A Lively Deadmarsh Novel (Lively Deadmarsh Novel Series, Book 1)

By: Katie Berry

Narrated by: Alex Knox

Length: 6 hrs and 23 mins

Publisher's summary

On December 31, 1981, high atop a snowy mountain peak in the rugged interior of British Columbia, Canada, 98 beautiful people eat, drink, laugh, and dance inside the opulent grand ballroom of the Sinclair Resort Hotel.

The clock strikes 12, a cheer goes up, and the music swells; balloons drop and streamers swirl.

Then blackness....

Fifteen seconds later, the power returns and every living soul inside the ballroom has vanished, never to be seen again.

Now, 40 years later, preternatural investigator Lively Deadmarsh and his psychic twin sister, Minerva, have been brought in to solve this decades-old mystery once and for all.

Should they fail, they may become part of it, forever.

©2021 Katie Berry (P)2021 Tantor

So far so good....

This is a story in 4 parts, not 1 book and it's sequel(s) and if I have a complaint it's that I didn't know that going in, I had already bought 1&2 before realizing there were two more as yet unpublished volumes.
But being halfway through the story I am enjoying it. Katie's Deadmarsh Twins are enjoyable both in character and in the number of literary, pop culture, and music references they make. The mystery is intriguing, and loaded with a number of theories about quantum physics and the nature of the universe(s) but also feature some good old-fashioned spookiness. But if this book interests you my recommendation would be to wait until all 4 parts are published and take it all in one fell swoop.

Too short….

This book just stopped in the middle of the story. Most books in a series have closure for the current story but leave enough suspense to make you question if there’s more coming. And you can pick any book in the series, and they are a story-still connected-but you don’t have to purchase all the books in the series to know what’s going on. This book is an epic failure in that respect. It’s the bait-and-switch here. If you enjoyed the FREE beginning (which I did), you’re more likely to purchase the rest of the books. But likely not for me. These books are too short to spend a credit on!!

Only part of the story

Lively enough, but more like young adult fiction. Characters are just so so, but plot was better. Only part of the story so left me hanging.

Not terrible

Like others have said, the story just cuts off so that you’re forced to get the next ‘book’ in the series which is such a money grab and annoying. It’s one thing to have an overarching story across the books to conclude at the end but each book resolves some small part, but this one doesn’t.

Lively and Minerva have weirdly flirtatious dialogue for a brother and sister. Why does Minerva admire her brothers physique?? Gross.

Several mentions of Lively and his time in SECIS(sp?) and being an interrogator but there’s no explanation of what that is or why he left to be a ghost hunter. No explanation of why he’s been so obsessed with the Sinclair Hotel since childhood. He just conveniently has been and has gathered a book of information about it.

They are so blasé about the weird things happening in the hotel that there’s no build to suspense, no thrill. Still an interesting story but yea, as of yet, still too many unanswered questions for a book, or should I say novella. I’ll probably get the rest and kick myself for wasting credits on such short books because I have a feeling this should have been one large novel or two smaller ones.

Narrator is good. Not the best I’ve heard but far from the worst. He doesn’t really have different voices for each character but there’s enough change in tone and inflection that they don’t all run together and he’s not monotonous.

Book 1 Great! Moves along well.

A little too much description that gets repetitive. But still a really good book for the first book.

Don’t like

I feel this story would have been better served starting at the beginning of this hotel being built and following through the early stories. I patiently listened to the story and did engage with the characters, mostly the Canadian policeman but going back and forth made the book choppy. The ending was no ending at all. I knew there were subsequent books that carried this story on but the way this one ended wasn’t even a cliffhanger and it didn’t finish anything at all. It was a void so I will not be buying the other two books because I am getting the feeling this story could have been written in two books and not three.

Too much going on

The arrogance of Lively and the constant flippant remarks and pop culture references get old, fast. The book is very disjointed as the author gets sidetracked multiple times, diverging from the main story to tell the tale of a character from the 60s in addition to the cop in the 80s and the brother/sister investigation in 2021. Book one ends abruptly and doesn't resolve the mystery. In addition, the description that the two are in mortal danger is untrue. They can leave any time they want and, in fact, appear to be welcomed by the hotel.

Odd

The dialogue between siblings borderlines on incestuous, the whole premise is that they are hired because they know the supernatural is involved and yet they are looking for a logical explanation.
No interest in purchasing the next installment.

Great, but for a few irritations

I read Katie Berry’s Claw a couple of months ago and thoroughly enjoyed it. I thought it was one of the best debut novels I have ever read. I was, therefore, looking forward to ABANDONED being released on audiobook. I checked Audible regularly to see when it would become available. So imagine my delight when it was released.

I immediately downloaded the book and started listening to it. But somehow, I was not as impressed with it as I was with Claw. I wanted to rate it 3.5 stars, but when I considered my gripes with the book, I thought it would be unfair to rate it three stars, and therefore, I rounded it up to four. While the writing was still excellent, I had the following three issues with it:

1) The book was relatively short (Audible 6 hrs 23 min) whereas Claw was 14 hrs 42min. I read somewhere, though, that it is part of a four-part series. Was the story written to maximise revenue from four different books rather than two or three decent-sized novels? I don’t know, but it leaves me feeling a bit cheated. I also love “getting into” a book, which Claw allowed me to do. This book offers no possibility of that, no prolonged atmosphere being created slowly over time. Ultimately, it feels like candyfloss, pleasant but doesn’t fill my hunger. On the other hand, Claw felt like a decent man-size (may one still say that?) T-bone steak with all the trimmings.

2) Following my first gripe, the book absolutely ends on a cliffhanger. It provides virtually no answers and literally ends just as a grand reveal is about to take place. This felt juvenile. For a moment, I felt I got trapped in an 80’s tv show where I have to wait an entire week for the outcome, only to be disappointed. I sincerely hope this won’t be the case with book 2 in the series.

3) The interaction between Lively and his twin sister, Minerva, irritated me. Their conversations were unnatural and immature. While it is probably supposed to come across lighthearted, it didn’t work for me. There was simply too much playful sarcasm. E.g.

a) “that is a big bingo, little sister. It is always nice to see you come up to speed like it”; or
b) “my, you are the gregarious one, friends everywhere it seems”; or
c) “Ladies first. Thank you, but I am a liberated woman. And besides, it’s supposed to be age before beauty, big brother”. The constant reference to “little sister” and “big brother” became very annoying after a while.

Was the book awful? No, not at all! I loved the reference to It’s a Wonderful Life (1946 movie) and Vincent D’Agosta (I am a huge fan of the movie and Child and Preston’s Pendergast series). The storyline has great potential, and the setting in a snow-covered abandoned hotel is simply perfect. The rest of the writing (excluding dialogue between the twins) was superb. I loved how the story went back and forth in time, explaining certain events leading to the current reality. This book series has some excellent potential.

If Katie considered offering a bit more than basically four short stories and refine the dialogue between the twins, I would score it 5 stars. For now, I am out of here, as I need to see what Book 2 (ABANDONED: Beginnings and Betrayals) in the series has to offer. Oh, PS, Alex Knox as narrator, is brilliant.

Starting out good

Need to listen to rest to decide but hopeful it will keep getting better. Can’t wait to continue