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The Magic of an Idea

De: Raul Barrios
Narrado por: Skye Alley
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While helping a friend's brother who was with trying to move on, he meets a woman at a Renaissance fair.

Riley goes on an adventure, trying to help his brother, while talking to a woman named Judith.

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It was a great story about 2 brothers and a gal named Judith.

great ending.

great 👍 stoty

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Biggest problem is the choice of narrator. This is from the viewpoint of a man so why didn't they use a male narrator? Also, this narrator used the same voice for EVERYONE.

Second biggest problem is the awkward writing. A better narrator could possibly have made up for the choppy writing but that is hard to tell. The dialogue absolutely does not work. It is painfully awkward and it's obvious no one ever thought to test it out first before finalizing the draft.

Once you dig through all of that, the story itself is a cute idea but the writing and narration just did not do it any justice. I'm glad it was so short. An entire novel would have been awful. But as is, it's meh.

Cute but,...

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