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Hell to Pay

Succubus, Book 2
Narrated by: Iggy Toma
Length: 8 hrs and 45 mins
4.5 out of 5 stars (321 ratings)
Regular price: $29.99
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Publisher's Summary

Ian survived his first week as a quality control tech for the biggest virtual reality game online. What's more, he's in love with the hottest woman imaginable.

Only trouble is, she's a demoness from hell. In a videogame. And now he has to go and rescue her.

There will be pirates in airships, lustful female elves, and an insanely powerful warlock intent on destroying Ian, Alaria, and Stig.

Join our intrepid trio as they journey to the frozen north - but no matter how cold it gets, the action is going to be hot, hot, HOT.

Warning: This is a story featuring naked women, threesomes, kinky sex, demons, warlocks, violence, revenge, and moral quandaries.

©2018 A.J. Markam (P)2018 Podium Publishing

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Predictable

2nd book in the series became predictable, and at times corny. Not a lot of character development. First half of the story was interesting. Last few chapters were difficult to get through.

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SMOKING HOT!!!

A pretty good tail (uh huh, I said that!) if I may say so, lol. I'm NOT gonna give any spoilers but I'll say that it IS adult material but it's well wrote and well narrated. Worth the money!
Now if they'll just hurry up and get parts 3 & 4 available. ...?

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Over the Top Sex

I enjoyed the first book much more. A fun premise and decent story. The amount of sex just made it less enjoyable to listen to. There's a huge difference between good sex scenes and going overboard. This will be the last of this series that I'll be getting.

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it's a good second book, but the series ie turning

the writing is still good, but the story is starting to lean more towards a porno.

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this is a damn good series.

I don't care what other people say, this is a damn good series. I'd say more, but I'm running out of space.

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Just started getting predictable.

I listened to the first one and it was like a insecure fanboy, and for what it was I was OK with it. But in this one it was very predictable, to the point of disappointment. The puns took a chapter more than it should and it needed to. And anytime you describe something it was this movie plus this movie and didn't really get into the storytelling it could have gotten into. Probably won't buy the 3rd book.

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Give this writer a noble prize!

Seriously these books are so good. They're full of emotions, philosophically, and adventure. All the lust is balanced out with good quality story, love, and philosophy. These books are a 10 out of 10.

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.high recommendation

a great story. good humor and tantalizing senses. the author get it right with this series.

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So very good.

I have to admit I laughed at a lot of the bad puns, especially the pirate ones. I do think that Male readers may find the Snow Elf portion fairly interesting, regardless of being geeky or not. There is definitely something to say about pay attention to one's partner and their needs.

On a different note, that last scene was the perfect closer for book 2. Can't wait to hear the next book.

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Loved it<br />

it's a little short. but to the point. love the story and the quick nerdy jokes. waiting to hear book 3

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Hell to Pay: Succubus, Book 2

A.J.Markam is one of my favorite Authors his talents shines and shows us all why with this book I gave it 5 stars when I read this book on kindle love the story and the characters The narration of Iggy Toma is great his voice acting skills and talent get you into this book a 12/10 great work a must to own on audible..☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆.

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