• Hell to Pay

  • Succubus, Book 2
  • By: A.J. Markam
  • Narrated by: Iggy Toma
  • Length: 8 hrs and 45 mins
  • 4.6 out of 5 stars (665 ratings)

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Publisher's Summary

Ian survived his first week as a quality control tech for the biggest virtual reality game online. What's more, he's in love with the hottest woman imaginable.

Only trouble is, she's a demoness from hell. In a videogame. And now he has to go and rescue her.

There will be pirates in airships, lustful female elves, and an insanely powerful warlock intent on destroying Ian, Alaria, and Stig.

Join our intrepid trio as they journey to the frozen north - but no matter how cold it gets, the action is going to be hot, hot, HOT.

Warning: This is a story featuring naked women, threesomes, kinky sex, demons, warlocks, violence, revenge, and moral quandaries.

©2018 A.J. Markam (P)2018 Podium Publishing

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Its just bad porn

book 1 had enough story and enough tease to be interesting. This is a bad star wars parody porno.

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if you cut the sex scenes it might have an hour of

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also feels like they are milking it into as many separate books as possible

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huh

this book was like listening to the most arotic of pornos, while sometimes giving you a bit of story. I do not recomend listening to this book with your girlfriend in the car. I don't care what you think, she's not gonna sudenly be interested in 3-somes and 4-somes..... damn it.

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Predictable

2nd book in the series became predictable, and at times corny. Not a lot of character development. First half of the story was interesting. Last few chapters were difficult to get through.

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70% sex 30% story

The first book in the series was about 70% Funny adventure story that had me grinnig from ear to ear and 30% hot sexy times that made the pants tight every time ;) ... In this one those number have been reversed, and although the sex is still hot, if somewhat more rapey at times, I feel like something is lost... The story doesnt have the time to really be fun and enganging, though it still made me smile... And since there was so much erotica it looses some of the punch, even though its still insanely hot, it is just to much.... The first book i binged and loved every minut of, but this one took me weeks to get though and that makes me kinda sad... Might give the next one a chance, but I will need a break in between

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So very good.

I have to admit I laughed at a lot of the bad puns, especially the pirate ones. I do think that Male readers may find the Snow Elf portion fairly interesting, regardless of being geeky or not. There is definitely something to say about pay attention to one's partner and their needs.

On a different note, that last scene was the perfect closer for book 2. Can't wait to hear the next book.

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SMOKING HOT!!!

A pretty good tail (uh huh, I said that!) if I may say so, lol. I'm NOT gonna give any spoilers but I'll say that it IS adult material but it's well wrote and well narrated. Worth the money!
Now if they'll just hurry up and get parts 3 & 4 available. ...?

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Different from the first book

Iggy's performance is just as good, maybe could work on the yelling (sounds like a loud whisper). The story is about 50% describing sex this time and is rather light on plot and hijinx. In an ironic twist, the first book made the sex better by applying lessons told in book 2 about foreplay and the preview of book 3 starts off with my feelings about book 2, too much of a good thing.

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This is great for my kinks

I still a little upset that anal is only mentioned and never performed but the plot is great and the narrator awesome, sadly that the female voices he make doesn't really sound female and even less at the moans.
I will continue listening the next book and hopefully there will be real anal going on.

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More of the same

I moved onto this second book after enjoying the first, but it is more of the same. There is nothing super compelling keeping me listening.

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  • John
  • 12-03-18

Hell to Pay: Succubus, Book 2

A.J.Markam is one of my favorite Authors his talents shines and shows us all why with this book I gave it 5 stars when I read this book on kindle love the story and the characters The narration of Iggy Toma is great his voice acting skills and talent get you into this book a 12/10 great work a must to own on audible..☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆.

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  • Anthony
  • 07-26-19

fantastic

fantastic just as good as the 1st one can't wait to hear the rest in the series