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Ian survived his first week as a quality control tech for the biggest virtual reality game online. What's more, he's in love with the hottest woman imaginable.

Only trouble is, she's a demoness from hell. In a videogame. And now he has to go and rescue her.

There will be pirates in airships, lustful female elves, and an insanely powerful warlock intent on destroying Ian, Alaria, and Stig.

Join our intrepid trio as they journey to the frozen north - but no matter how cold it gets, the action is going to be hot, hot, HOT.

Warning: This is a story featuring naked women, threesomes, kinky sex, demons, warlocks, violence, revenge, and moral quandaries.

©2018 A.J. Markam (P)2018 Podium Publishing

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Its just bad porn

book 1 had enough story and enough tease to be interesting. This is a bad star wars parody porno.

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if you cut the sex scenes it might have an hour of

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also feels like they are milking it into as many separate books as possible

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Predictable

2nd book in the series became predictable, and at times corny. Not a lot of character development. First half of the story was interesting. Last few chapters were difficult to get through.

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huh

this book was like listening to the most arotic of pornos, while sometimes giving you a bit of story. I do not recomend listening to this book with your girlfriend in the car. I don't care what you think, she's not gonna sudenly be interested in 3-somes and 4-somes..... damn it.

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This is great for my kinks

I still a little upset that anal is only mentioned and never performed but the plot is great and the narrator awesome, sadly that the female voices he make doesn't really sound female and even less at the moans.
I will continue listening the next book and hopefully there will be real anal going on.

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More of the same

I moved onto this second book after enjoying the first, but it is more of the same. There is nothing super compelling keeping me listening.

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fun story

I am enjoying the series a lot. Good action and story lines. can't wait for the next books.

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70% sex 30% story

The first book in the series was about 70% Funny adventure story that had me grinnig from ear to ear and 30% hot sexy times that made the pants tight every time ;) ... In this one those number have been reversed, and although the sex is still hot, if somewhat more rapey at times, I feel like something is lost... The story doesnt have the time to really be fun and enganging, though it still made me smile... And since there was so much erotica it looses some of the punch, even though its still insanely hot, it is just to much.... The first book i binged and loved every minut of, but this one took me weeks to get though and that makes me kinda sad... Might give the next one a chance, but I will need a break in between

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Just couldn’t continue

Characters continue to do the same mistakes and the story feels like a fetch quest. The author needs to understand gaming and frankly I’m tired of the MC ignoring game mechanics, especially that of his own class. The game shouldn’t even work for him.

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It was okay

The narrator did a fine job with this book. His voice quality was good and tone consistent throughout it. The story itself was only okay, however. It was entirely too predictable and the erotic scenes did nothing to enhance or progress the story or character development at all. I dare say it would have been more enjoyable without them. Nevertheless, the motif in this book is a weak point for me and if he does a third I will probably get it.

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  • 12-03-18

Hell to Pay: Succubus, Book 2

A.J.Markam is one of my favorite Authors his talents shines and shows us all why with this book I gave it 5 stars when I read this book on kindle love the story and the characters The narration of Iggy Toma is great his voice acting skills and talent get you into this book a 12/10 great work a must to own on audible..☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆.

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  • 07-26-19

fantastic

fantastic just as good as the 1st one can't wait to hear the rest in the series