Code Name: Fitzwilliam

A Pride and Prejudice Variation

By: Georgiana Voss

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

Mr. Darcy did not come to Hertfordshire to dance. He came because a traitor did.

England, 1811. To the world, Fitzwilliam Darcy is pride and ten thousand a year. To the Crown, he is something else entirely — the operative they call Fitzwilliam, hunting the men who are selling England's secrets to Napoleon.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet was not supposed to see the cipher. One glance at a stolen dispatch at the Meryton assembly, and she is inside a war she cannot see, guarded by the one man in England who cannot afford to explain himself.
Now every letter is a weapon, every ballroom a battlefield, and the slowest burn in Hertfordshire is the one neither of them can name.

A clean, closed-door Pride and Prejudice variation

• Slow-burn enemies-to-lovers romance threaded with espionage, ciphers, and Napoleonic peril
• Sweet and closed-door — no explicit content
• A complete romance with an HEA
• Book 1 of the Code Name: Darcy series — continue with Code Name: Elizabeth

no consistency

was exciting, but then it kept skipping. Elizabeth was married, now she is Miss Bennet again and they have hopes.
oh and every chapter they have an enemy, family most of the time, and it is taken care of in that chapter.
All the marks of either AI or inexperience.

confusing

chapters out of order. 9-11; 1-8; 12-18 makes more sense. interesting plot. when cleaned up and corrected, would like to read again.

Wow…

Who writes this stuff? Too many variations now that are full of inconsistencies, errors, or just seem incomplete. The main plot is fine, but at what point of the original are we? The whole period from the first assembly to Rosings seem to be combined to a few days, skipping over Collins in Meryton, and charlotte already married at Hunsford, plus several lines that imply Elizabeth had already visited Kent. They are so scattered throughout that I’m thinking more about the timeline than the actual plot at times.

Interesting but poorly edited.

I enjoyed the intrigue of the story but right in the middle of the story, just as it gets really exciting, there are 3 chapters that seem to have come from another book. I had to go back and make sure I accidentally forwarded past some of the chapters. After that the story resumes and comes to a successful conclusion.