His Undoing: A Gay For You Erotic Short Story

By: Aria Grace

Narrated by: Fred Wolinsky

When Mike found out he would be sharing a dorm with a former football star, he was terrified. He'd been bullied by jocks all his life for being scrawny and weak and didn't have high expectations of how it would go. To his surprise, Brett was a great guy that was easy to get along with and seemed to enjoy his company. When Mike learned that Brett was gay, it was a shock but it also explained the threatening letters that Mike had been receiving. Was Mike really at risk because of a jealous ex? Was there even anything to be jealous of?

©2012-2014 Aria Grace (P)2014 Aria Grace

Narrator Ruined it for me

Cute story but the narrator was awefull I really considered not finishing the book. The men’s voices sounded the same, I was not sure who was speaking.

disapointing

I really like the story, but the narrator was terrible! It was like listening to the teacher from Feris Beuler. I recommend getting the regular version and skipping this mess.

Sweet and stimulating

This was a sweet coming out story that was also tender and erotic. You really get to like the two main characters. The story skillfully avoids the cliche that it could have so easily fallen into. The sex comes from the characters and situation and is not artificially forced onto the story. The narrator gives a real naturalness to the first person narration, and you feel like he is a real person telling you his story. He does a nice job distinguishing the other voices as well. His emotional content is full of nuances. I enjoyed listening to this story and hope to hear more by this author and from this narrator.

Sometimes it’s just the narrator

The story, albeit short, was fine. A bit unresolved and weak with the antagonist part. Hardly seemed worth his introduction. The weakest was the narrator. His voice sounded too “old” for the characters he was narrating. I ended up listening to the book at a higher speed to make the voice sound differently and to speed him up in his narration. If you only have an hour to kill this isn’t a bad story.

A captivating listen

Would you listen to His Undoing: A Gay For You Erotic Short Story again? Why?

Yes. It really drew me into the characters and storyline, and I enjoyed spending time with them. Like any good book or movie, it will be nice to hear again -- and I will probably find more nuances the second time around.

What did you like best about this story?

I liked the deep tenderness, yet real sensuality of the two main characters. Following Mike's journey and personal discoveries were especially heartwarming. He was very real. That is what made the sexual scenes all the more steamy.

Have you listened to any of Fred Wolinsky’s other performances before? How does this one compare?

Not yet, but I would like to see what else he can do. I love that he does not sound like a radio announcer, but rather like a real college kid. His narration drew me into the story and characters. I felt like I was experiencing a movie.

Was this a book you wanted to listen to all in one sitting?

Yes. It was less than 2 hours, so that is certainly possible. The story moved quickly and had some unexpected twists. I was always curious to see what would happen next.