Please, Pick Me

De: M.M. Delorey

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

A warning before you proceed. This book contains scenes that may be offensive to some people. If you have a sensitive nature and don't enjoy violence or being grossed out then this is not the book for you.

This book is a story about hope and self discovery. Just kidding.. It's a vile little story about a beautiful woman named Lucy who happens to have some absolutely disgusting habits. Derrick, a super great guy-sorry that's also a lie, finds himself in a terrible situation. Having to play witness and unwilling participant to Lucy's foul nature. How can you blame Lucy for what she does, the temptation was just too great to deny. Derrick's just the poor sucker who got swept along for the ride.

Ai

Don’t like that is AI narrator would have been 100% better with a real person. Still a wickedly good story.

Interesting story

Loved the story! The AI narration wasn’t the best, would have been amazing with better narration.

absolutely disgusting

it took me so long to read. how often I wanted to throw up? I lost count. not for everyone but if you love authors like Matt Shaw and some other kings of gore well you should probably read this... if you can finish it.

Interesting play on words

Really great beginning! Fast pace that draws the reader in. However, her mindset and evolving gamelan throughout the plot didn't make sense to me. I felt like the author tried to make her complex by having her submit to cravings but at the same time show empathy idk somewhat confusing how it came across- maybe just me! Overall nice and very unique short story!

Also I had no issue with the AI voice!

Waste of time

First off, I usually hate virtual voices, but this one didn’t sound too bad, so I figured I’d give it a shot.
I absolutely love dark, gory, messed-up thrillers. This one… yeah, it’s definitely disgusting — but that’s all it is. It’s just gross, and honestly, it feels lazy.

It’s easy to shock people when characters are eating their own shit or picking at scabs — I mean, where’s the creativity in that? This story could have been really good.