Major Jake Thomas is on a roll. With the help of the Artificial Life: Intelligent Computing Environments, or ALICE, systems, he has successfully faced off with the hostile NeHaw three times. With continued support from his inner circle of female recruits, all handpicked by the ALICEs to further their own agenda, he continues to try to help Earth return to glory.
As Jake works to assemble a space fleet from captured and constructed vessels to address the expanding NeHaw aggression, the terrestrial challenges at home continue to pile up. With troubles in California, Maine, and Washington State to plague Jake and his team, the threat of a two-front war looms ahead.
©2015 CW Lamb (P)2015 Tantor
This story picks up where Al:ice left off. An alien-induced apocalypse has thrust our 21st-century civilization back into the 19th. But, with the help of the Alices, Jake has re-educated about 3000 people, taking them from the horse age to the space age.They are engaged in several, varied activities such as training soldiers and space ship crews, developing new technologies, improving agriculture, increasing safety in communities, exploring the capabilities of the Alices, getting to know their new alien allies, and preparing defenses against the alien enemy. All this while fighting off marauding bands of local hooligans, rescuing enslaved civilians, and trying to protect the secrecy of their advanced situation.
The formerly subjugated alien races have allied themselves with the humans after Jake defeated the bad guy overlords, but this race of bad guys wants revenge and our destruction. However, there is treachery within their ranks! Some are out to take care of themselves and damn the genocidal goals of the rest. The stage is set for several exciting events. And the story delivers. But we have a new author here, and this series is experiencing some birthing pains.
The same narrator who read Al:ice also reads this book, and the same problems remain. He sounds too old to be voicing all these very young people, and he does not do characterizations. Well, he does some hick type accents, but there is no rhyme or reason to the accents, and there is no distinction between all the males or all the females. But you can get past that. Other than the bad voices, his reading is good.
There are far fewer grammar, syntax, and collocation errors than in the first book, but it could still use a going over by a high school writing teacher (or me). Besides the incorrect use of "whomever," some of the errors are: "the surrounding walls all around them" (twice!), "looking for both danger and evaluating the damage done," "it was similar but larger than the stasis bed he had been in," "the women had insisted in dragging him away," "he saw a visible change in the man's demeanor," and the totally incomprehensible "the top had a complete radius across the 12-inch width." And there is still a serious lack of past perfect tense which does sometimes cause confusion. The author admitted he had his books proof-read by relatives. Obviously they are not sufficiently composition-sophisticated.
The first book was plagued by juvenile sex fantasies and stupid coy conversations, yet without being explicit. This actually detracted from the engaging story, and nobody enjoyed it. In this book, the author has dialed way back in terms of the kittenish comments Jake's harem makes. He has also severely reduced the amount of discussion of the girls' bodies. He did leave in one which was still an eye roller, and the girls are still often scantily clad and clingy. All this reduction is a great improvement on the quality of the story, but the only real personalities in the book are Jake and Alice. The elimination of the fantasy stuff makes the girls seem more intelligent and capable in their careers than they did in the first book, although they all are still 2-dimentional, insipid characters.
NEVERTHELESS, all that aside, this is still a story that intrigues. Despite the ease with which most conflicts are handled, and despite the fact that the writing does not compare to that of other super-professional authors most of us have read, this book still draws us in. We like this story. Jake is not only forced to try to re-civilize the rest of North America, as well as reach out to Australia, and later, beyond, but he also has to deal with the interstellar bad guys and their hired mercenaries. And what: Alice 9? We want to know how this happened. The action doesn't have the detail and emotional connection that Campbell or Nuttall could provide, but it is still good. I have spent so much space snarking on the flaws here because I hate to see a good idea riddled with easily-fixed problems. I want to know what happens next; I want to see how the world redevelops; I want to know how the conflict with the aliens works out and what Jake decides to do with these new interstellar travel capabilities. I want to read the next book!
I enjoyed this book as I did the first in this series. I look forward to the next installment of the series. I hope to hear more about the future of ALICE and what becomes of the post contact human race.
A fun fast paced action filled space opera. My only negative comment is that the narrator doesn't do the best job at delivering distinguishable voices for the female characters. Hopefully in the next installment Sarah and Jake's poly-amorous relationship will develop whereas in Alice-9 the tension built but never came to a head. If you liked the first Alice you'll love this one
I'm not a consistent reviewer so know this is about the 10th review I've ever submitted.
Being the second book in the series, readers should be familiar with the he world CW Lamb has created. Our Protagonist seems comfortable with his command, never doubting the idea he is leading the known world. His amorous encounters of the first book are softened and I believe much better than in Alice (book 1). We start to see the parental Jake more than the prom-date-Jake.
As for his leadership style, I'm comfortable with his command structure but somewhat disappointed with the Alices. They seem to be great helpers running bots and whatnot but seem to scheme almost as much as the doting girlfriends.
For the writer, CW enjoys holding a bit back from the reader so they are somewhat surprised when a plan finishes in Jake's favor. He needs to spend more time redeeming Sarah (which I hope happens in Book 3).
To the Narrator, Mr Drummond, I like him. He's managing about 40 voices including 9 different but identical AIs. Yes, he has a challenge with most of the voices being female but it is not a distraction to my ears. I'm generally aware of who is speaking by Mr Drummond's acting. For me, if I don't hear Mr Drummond but instead am immersed in the story, the narrator is good. Mr Drummond fully succeeds on this. Bravo to his performance.
I hope readers enjoy this book as much as I have and give it a good listen. Looking forward to book 3. -RJ
the narrator leaves a lot to be desired. he is kind of hard to listen to sometimes. someone else described it as listening to your grandpa read a book to you that's pretty close. the book feels like it was written by a high schooler it's very predictable and it never really builds up too much if you can't find something better I suggest downloading that. it's not bad but it's just not great either I didn't hate it but I think there was a lot of room for improvement
i love storys about magic with adult humor in the storys like Piers Anthony and Orson Scott Card i also like some sci-fi storys. The storys i like best is : On a Pale Horse, The Lost Gate, Ender's Game, Split Infinity. i do not like short storys.
when is book 2 coming out?
hard to find good story's like this.
I have book 1 and 2 and love them.
I enjoyed the books greatly. Jake has grown so much through the two books and the development of his character keeps progressing well. I think that, as others have stated, the interaction with the women of the story is weak at best and ridiculous overall. It would be a better book in my opinion without all the juvenile sex stuff. My biggest complaint about this book was the ending. It felt rushed. There was so little closure to the story that I was left unsatisfied. I hope there are more coming and I hope he grows the women characters more, especially since it seems like he would be lost without them.
Overall, it's a great story that I simply couldn't "put down." I tend to think that the author has a pretty high opinion of how someone would act in Jake's circumstances, but I also tend to think I'd act the same way. :) A great follow up to the first story. Look forward to another!
"Not a bad sequel"
The baddies getting a gook kicking
Listened top book 1 of the sequel - AL-ICE so fact I bothered to listen to this one says it cant be too bad.
Naah, sometimes exciting but never moving.
A bit less of the preoccupation with having to service multiple women than the first book (which was welcome as didn't do much for the plot. Not a bad story, not great but held my interest till the end which is better than a good many. The hero is a bit too perfect to be credible - reminds me of myself :)
This is a bit of a lads fantasy book so if you like guns girls and space stuff it's for you
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