Witch of the Federation III

Federal Histories, Book 3

By: Michael Anderle

Narrated by: Jesse Vilinsky

Now that Stephanie has graduated to Protector of ALL, she needs to gain the Federation’s respect. But can she mature into the leader they need her to be?

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Love this Series

This series has not one but many great characters and plenty of action. They have fun while saving Earth and other planets!

My opinion, bummer!

Unlike the first two books, this one disappointed me to some degree.

First, I dislike it when an author has the characters involved in chatter (overall goofing around) and/or introspection during a battle. It makes no sense to me since the focus needs to be on the battle.

Second, the author builds the lead character into a major player with magic, but then to make the battles last longer, fails to utilize the abilities that have been established!

Parts of the story were great, but other parts dragged the story down. Some of the kibitzing was so problematic for me that I had to stop listening for a while. Not good!

Another Incredible Journey

The character growth is amazing. And the storyline is evolving nicely. And naming the hidden enemy, not so hidden anymore, is a grand move. The betrayals suck but necessary for the storyline.
Keep up the great work.

Enjoyed

Although there was more foul language than I like the story is good. Like the way the team works together. Military almost all the way.

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everyone has the same sense of humor. There isn't a single person who doesn't respond to humor differently in the story. its a mary sue power fantasy with no strong nemesis.