Mating with the Raptor

Beast Mating Erotica

By: Christie Sims, Alara Branwen

Narrated by: Devra Woodward

Marga was the Protectress, the city's leader, charged with defending it against dinosaur attacks. It is her sworn duty to protect her city at all costs, even when a pack of velociraptors attack her and her men at a small, undermanned outpost outside of the city.

The battle is a vicious one, and after a daring maneuver to save a fellow soldier, she finds herself trapped by the pack leader, a powerful male. The creature captures the Protectress and takes her to his cave. Will this raptor make the Protectress his next meal? Or does the beast have different plans for the beautiful warrioress?

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Too clinical.

Narrator's fairly monotone clinical reading didn't help the lackluster writing. Read it but don't bother with the audio version.

Half poorly written filler, the other half just as bad.

This is prolly one of the most poorly written eroticas I've ever listen/read in a while. Heck I feel like I could have done a better job, at least when it came down to the dirty deed later on in the story. Their were even parts that repeated tho not many but it does happen at least once or twice when you finally get to the male raptor female scene. Would I recommend this to anyone with a fantasy for Beastiality? No if anything it made me wanna look for something better. Understandable it's erotica but it's a story and that isn't an excuse for just how bad it was.