Forger of Worlds

By: Simon Archer

Narrated by: Lance Greenfield, Melissa Moran

Length: 10 hrs and 37 mins

Publisher's Summary

Craft your own world. Trade with neighboring empires. Become a god.

Garrett thought Terra Forma was just a game, but in reality, it was a test created by a devastatingly beautiful ancient goddess to find the most creative man in the universe.

Now, in order to help her defeat an ancient primordial deity, Garrett will have to take a dirt rock and transform it into the heart of the most powerful empire the universe has ever seen.

And to do that, he'll have to unlock portals to other worlds, harvest their resources, and bring back settlers to his world.

Sure, it's a nearly impossible task, but at the same time, how often do you get the chance to play god?

Warning: This book contains adult elements and sheer incredibleness.

©2019 James Garner (P)2019 James Garner

not good

ya this really only has 1.5 hours of planet forging the rest of it was a ok lit RPGs but the narrators disappointed me in the fact that the don't split the men and women voices the female thoughts are the only thing she narrates but they still did good in the characters though just had one expectation but then it didn't happen and that put a bad taste in my mouth towards the rest of it.

3 of 4 people found this review helpful

Good

Like the story but find piontless chapters of sex. Would rather have more story of lvling a different worlds.

4 of 6 people found this review helpful

narration

would have been better to split it up for the male and female to read the respective parts and not just the chapters.

2 of 3 people found this review helpful

Good, but needs a better adult content warning

An enjoyable read. A good world building litrpg. The sex scenes were not written well, and reminded me too much of nerd/gamer wish fulfillment. Otherwise, the main subject matter was enjoyable. It was interesting enough for me to want to pick up the second book, should it be released as an audio book.

Disclaimer: I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.

Where's The Next Book???

Holy crap!!! This book was awesome and I'm eager to listen to the next book.

For the LitRPG audiophiles, this book is great. For those into erotic lit or hentai, this book will fill that need as well. The overall story is just freaking awesome. From having to learn his new skills and using those skills to create what looks to be an unstoppable army, Garrett is kicking ass in this story.

The narrator did an amazing job with the different characters and the switch to Melissa Moran for the female voices really helped keep the dialogues moving along. I noticed times where the narrator would say the same phrase or word twice, which I believe were breaks between reads, so the editing should be cleaner and maybe reviewed before publishing. It annoyed me a couple times, but after I focused on the story some more I didn't mind too much.

It would be pretty bad ass if there was more audio production to back the story... SFX for leveling and battles would be nice to have.

I would definitely recommend this book to anyone that enjoys the LitRPG genre.


** Note: I received a free copy of this book for an unbiased review.

Fascinating World Building!

Fun Story and Solid Narration!

Our MC (a well rounded, world champion) is offered a chance to save the world. He accepts and is transported into a game world (Universe?) where he literally gets to play god, build out a solar system, and travel through portals to find allies/conquer enemies.

Story from different characters point of view in different chapters is interesting and gives a better understanding of their view of things.

To sum it up this is a fun "base building" story (people who are easily bored probably wont enjoy this genera) with combat and some haram elements (sex scenes too, though not many)

I am looking forward to the next book in the series.

Wish the MC would just die.

Picked this up when there were no reviews. I have no complaints about the narration. The overall world/story was interesting, it was a refreshing spin on game like mechanics and the God-ling abilities are pretty cool. This book also has references that I actually get. (I was nine when I saw 'Soldier')

Now for the things I hated. Lets write a summery shall we?
Garrett is the most awesome, physically, mentally, and spiritually capable person in the world, and all the girls want him. He is perfect in every way shape and form. He is the world champion pro gamer of Terra forma. A virtually reality world building game that is actually a pretty awesome concept. Garrett has been everywhere, done everything, has a training program that would make a navy seal cry, and still manages to have time to be a nerd.

After sex with a girl with a (lets go with, body of large breasted anime proportions) he takes a 3am run. This is at about nine minutes into the book and I already wanted him to die. As he was running toward a red light on an empty street, I thought that was were the author was going with it. Garrett finds some girls that want to screw him and anomalously joins a virtual gladiator fight. He kicks ass because he is awesome and perfect. Then he defends a woman in a bar from a stereotypical biker asshat that is three times Garrett's size with ease, because he is awesome and perfect. Turns out girl is a goddess. She wants to screw him but can't, and she needs him to save the universe. Insert cringy call to mom here.

1 hour 40 minutes into the book and things actually start. You know the MC is going to overcome every obstacle, because he is awesome and perfect. Meets another goddess. She wants to screw him, but can't. Some actually cool stuff happens. Garrett enters a new world. Stuff happens, Garrett wins, not because of effort, determination, and a little luck, but because the is awesome and perfect. Meets a slime girl. She wants to screw him, but can't. Garrett is like, "No, I'm awesome, let's do this." Then there is a battle that is decent and MC wins less because he is awesome and perfect and more because he used his brain. So that was new.

I think if the Author didn't feel the need so say "MC climbed Mt. Everest" just to justify changing clothes, I wouldn't have hated the MC so much. I think changing or deleting about 1,000 words would turn the MC from "awesome and perfect" to "actually likeable".
The most interesting character in this story is Silent Jay.

1 of 2 people found this review helpful

Disappointed

Okay, I fell asleep on it twice. I stopped listening and could not finish. Also the audio repeats in places. Just disappointing

2 of 4 people found this review helpful

WARNING

this book opens up with a sex scene not one paragraph in and we're already discussing MCs rooster getting along with his companions kitty cat
and yes I did see the"Warning: This book contains adult elements" In most other books that means them merely acknowledging sex exists.
fade to Black/light erotica is standard not mediares in your face meat and two veg

5 of 12 people found this review helpful

Loved the story

I loved this story my only complaint was the narration the two different people I wish that they would of just teamed up and done female and male characters instead of one time the guy doing all the voices then switching and going to the female lead and doing all the voices

1 of 3 people found this review helpful