Demonic Dragon

A Harem Fantasy Adventure, Book 1

De: J. Bryan

Narrado por: Olivia Neel

A twenty-year-old who was often seen as a loser finds himself in an unexpected situation. After a brutal street fight leaves him unconscious, he awakens to discover that he has been transported to a new world, inhabiting the body of a young dragon.

Equipped with a helpful system and supported by two beautiful wives, Carter makes a vow to never hide in the shadows again. He sets out on a quest to claim the title of Dragon King and live a life of power and prominence.

Warning: The novel contains violence and mature themes.

©2023 J. Bryan (P)2023 J. Bryan

Is my type of book.

If you like power fantasy and OP character with in his tire with some spicy stuff now and than this is for you.

good story, Terrible narrator

the story was good and kept my listening; the narrator kept saying word weirdly or leaving small gaps in other word that were more complex like they where sounding them out.

This is a VERY BAD Voice ACTOR

i am sure the story would great on its own but i had to stop listening, the Voice actor, appears to not be able to read english, and says words as they are spelled and not how they are spoken, VERY HARD TO LISTEN TO

needs to be re-recorded

As a few others have also put forth this is a good story the problem is the Narrator. Olivia Neel I hope you read this. First you read out words that should just be done by making the sound such as yawn or fu fu fu(giggling). Second are you reading a dictionary or a story? Where's the emotional inflection? Third you should really take the time to flesh out some distinctive voices for each character half the time the little girl has a deeper voice than the MC. I hope that this is one of your first narrations as I shutter to think of the books that do not get the recognition they honestly might deserve due to this kind of narration. As you have a pleasant voice I could see you getting more jobs if only you did a bit to be better.

Good Story and Good Narration, buuut…

Hopefully author and narrator reads this. This was a real good story for the first in the series. Would have liked to see more world building and gradual development of MC. Instead we have a OPMC right off the bat. Especially considering the two characters that made one were wimps. The story had much more potential. But this is all just small stuff. I don’t necessarily hate stories that have OPMCs. That said let’s move on to narration. I gave her 4 stars. She was really good and she sounds almost exactly like Sierra Kline. I had to do a double check to make sure. The reason for the 4 stars is I feel she gave a deeper voice to characters that should have been higher. Sometimes the MC had a higher voice than his wives or daughter. His daughter for sure should have had a higher upbeat kid voice than a low voice. So that’s it. If you correct that and it would be right on!