Alien King Crashes the Wedding

The Lumerian Knights, Book 1

By: Becca Brayden

Narrated by: Teddy Hamilton

Length: 6 hrs and 32 mins

Publisher's Summary

Art dealer Sasha Montgomery is both nervous and thrilled to be invited to the Caldorian Earth Base for her best friend’s wedding to an alien warrior. One, she’s never seen an alien up close, and two, she made a promise to be there, no matter how much the idea of being surrounded by hundreds of huge alien warriors frightened her.

She thinks she’s got it all under control, until Dagan, the groom’s best friend, crashes the wedding. He’s smoking hot - way too hot to be an alien - and determined to seduce her. Sasha gives in to passion with unexpected consequences. Ancient power rises in response to their newfound bond, and the once innocent Sasha discovers that Dagan has been keeping secrets. He’s not just another warrior, he’s a king, and the power rising between them hasn’t been seen in a millennium.

Sasha must learn to control the force clawing its way through her body...or destroy them all.

©2019 BAWB Inc. (P)2020 BAWB Inc.

If it’s not your cup of tea...

Then don’t purchase. In the description it plainly says, “erotica”, this book is that. Even plainer for you, I’d say mild BDSM. Mild being, spanking and hard, rough sex.
This is actually a very well written book, first of three. Friendly aliens protect the Earth, while hostile aliens wage war. So, there’s the plot, while in threat for your lives don’t forget to have mind blowing sex.
I hope this helps. 😉

Narrator was awesome but ....

I know now why it got low reviews. I didn't like the neanderthal, "he man" attitude, the spankings as well as I thought it very crude he made her have sex with all his warriors watching! What decent person, or alien, would share his girlfriend while others watched!? Anyway, I skipped a lot just to get to the end and that wasn't even satisfying. Won't be reading the other 2 books.

Fun Premise Bad Product

I’m always excited to experience a new alien trope. It didn’t even make it out of the gate. Insta-lust is fine, insta love, come on.

Sasha - 23 year old virgin, so awkward, so self conscious. Can we not do this? Especially when she goes from that to taking a giant alien, member after they speak for 15 minutes? Then 24 hours later she gets railed in front of a bunch of warriors? She didn’t really stand up for herself, not that it would make a difference.

Her best friend is a pimp. If your friend just got out of a relationship, has legitimate trauma and issues opening up, you wouldn’t serve her up to some dominant male, that would give her no choice in her future. You certainly would give her all the information, allow her to make an informed decision, and support her if she needed time. And, oh by the way, if you slight them in any way they will coerce you with sex, and spank you. You have no space to say no.

The King- I’m not sure I can blame him for being a domineering, prick. He’s a king and no one is going to disagree with him. Of course I disliked him and his behavior. It’s not ok to demand trust and ignore “no.” It’s not ok to set all the rules in a relationship and make unilateral decisions. It’s not ok to use size and force with your partner, but who is going to check him?

Can we stop with the weak women who are so chained by a man’s ability to bring forth an orgasm they’ll agree to anything? Can we allow them a brain between their ears? How about they set boundaries? If they must lose their virginity, how about they get some time to reflect, and acknowledge that after all that, activity, they wouldn’t be up for 10 rounds the next day? I know these books gloss over bathrooms, morning breath, and the unbelievable mess that all that spunk would cause, but give it some level of reality. Flesh out these women at least a little bit, and give the men a chance at being something other than alpha, dominant, chauvinistic, grunting, jizz machines.

Imagine if...

tatted frat boys were ‘aliens’ and silly sorority girls were their opioids. I mean, there’s NO world building in this book. Everyone is on earth acting super ditzy, the alien thing is peripheral. The possessiveness in the relationship was kinda hot, but the sex was waaaaay overwritten. I got TMI illness. I hate blonde nymphlike heroines like this 🤮. And a hero that calls his woman “little one” ALL THE TIME screams pedo. And what about the idiot friend who tried make the mfc feel responsible for being unknowingly splooged with concentrated alien babymaker sperm. He NEVER TOLD HER he was spraying her womb with guaranteed to knock-you-up-juice. That's like a dude secretly pulling off the condom. Not cool.

I ran out of credits and this garbage was included.

A pie with no fill

This book is like waking up to smell a warm apple pie…just realized it’s a candle. It’s very generic storytelling of their main characters. Alpha male falls in love with weak and emotionally damaged female. Then there’s misunderstandings, and then there is stupidity. Like lady this dude is an alien ask detailed questions. At this point I’m thinking the author made the main female in her early 20s just so she can explain why she’s so freaking dumb.

Oh and the author kind of forgets their side characters throughout the story. Of course you’re going to remember her best friend but I cannot for the life of me remember her husband‘s name until I heard it again at the end of the book. This man is supposed to be the main male’s character’s best friend. It’s just that the side characters and their connections to the main characters is something i didn’t realize I look forward to as a reader.

For me when I listen to books I want to get lost in the story telling. I want to feel happinesses, sadness, embarrassment. Even if it’s second hand. InsteadI feel as though I was given a pie with no filling.

Oh and there’s unnecessary powers to move the plot for the next book you have been warned.

The Perfect Book!!! I love it!

If I could choose a book to be the leading lady in IRL it would be this one, hands down.

I'm so excited to see what comes next!! I'll have the next 2 books listened to by days end. I really hope that Teddy Hamilton does the fourth book as well!!! He is really great... I've never understood how he goes from a super deep voice to a believable female voice and back and forth. Well, I really hope that 5 and 6 and many more are on there way! 😁

📢 *Spoiler Alert!*📢📢 Read after U read book! 📢
(The following contains serious spoilers- DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU'RE OK WITH BEING SPOILED-LOL-OR HAVE ALREADY READ/LISTENED)
📢 *Spoiler Alert!*📢📢 Read after U read book!

Anyway, like I said, If I could choose a book to be the leading lady in IRL it would be this one, hands down. I mean, besides the best sex ever and with a superbly dominate man... well, alien with a beautiful body (so a manly alien hehe) I would have the BEST LIFE EVER! I would be an Artist Queen with new DNA providing longer life to myself and my husband, THE KING, as well as the healing abilities and her ability to help the Lumerian Knights with their swords (or their markings maybe). I guess some people might call that winning. Yes, Queen Sasha was definitely winning! 😁💜

Sexy with good writing and story

I read the second book of the series before reading this one and I wish I read this first. This book was way better than the second one. Since it’s listed as erotica, I just thought it was all about sex with no actual storyline. But I was wrong. Yes, there are lots of sex, but there are some good story along with good foundation building of lumarian knights. This should be listed as erotica with good sci fy. Highly recommend.

WOW WOW WOW!!!!

Very good story.
loved the narrator.
Great storyline.
Great characters.
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!

Typical Alien Romance

This was an "ok" book. Not enough substance to the storyline. Noticed there are more than one. Hopefully they get better. 🤷‍♀️

Dominance Alien (Humanoid) SMUT

Dominance Alien (Humanoid) SMUT.

The plot, story and characters are bad but i don't have any high expectations. But Teddy Hamilton performance was amazing.

Deep Inside

Drinking game - drink every time you hear 'deep inside.' Do not do this with just 'inside,' you could end up with alcohol poisoning!

Strange ?

If you are looking for fic. Without sci. Her is a porn book with 50% sex and a thin story with a try for humor I think ?
Hamilton has done a remarkable job with there is to work with !
Denmark 🇩🇰

"Little one" is the main charasteric trait for her

Plot pretty simple here. No feisty woman, more like please stand your ground at even once please. Ending was what credited extra star. One time reading.

Slow start but gets better

…and there are loads of steamy scenes to hold your interest! There are some surprisingly interesting fantasy/sci-fi elements. Will definitely try the next book

Couldn't stop listening !

So this was the second time I listened to the book and still got so entranced that I couldn't put it down.
Teddy Hamilton's performance is superb.
The story is intriguing and captivating.
Loved every minute!

Gotta love aliens

Found this rather addicting to be honest and finished it in 3days oops. Off to download the next in the series to see what else happens.

Only thing that would make it better would be duet narrative.

Brilliant story

I loved this book ,science fiction, aliens,sex, have down powder the next two books in the series can't wait to listen to them😊

interesting sexily stimulating sifi

Author really missed out on writing some really good science fiction here
The story is good but could’ve been brilliant if only the characters had more depth of personality
The plot has potential to make a great story of galactic proportions with interesting plot twists if only some effort was put into fleshing out the surroundings of the character’s their culture how and why they came to earth in the first place where their from etc
i would like to see this book rewritten (including the steamy sex scenes) with much more details on the character’s,surroundings , alien culture and a greater explanation of how all the alien technology works
To the author you’ve not only written a very good sexy story but it needs to be taken to the next level now with the suggestions above and it would be mainstream sellable great