Controlling the Goddess

By: Michael Anderle

Narrated by: Andrea Emmes

What is a billionaire heiress supposed to do when her Lagarde blood is starting to show and she has a goddess inside of her?

Chloe has learned more about herself inside of a video game than she ever did with her partying friends. Now, she has a team of players working with her as she seeks to find the missing parts of KieraFreya. The worst part? There are other players looking for the armor, too.

Now, there is another god getting involved. Chloe is starting to lead with her heart, but will she make the right decisions?

She has a few parts of the armor, and she needs more. But, every time she gains a piece, KieraFreya becomes more powerful.

Can Chloe help KieraFreya without losing her body to the Goddess of Retribution?

©2019 Michael Anderle (P)2020 Dreamscape Media, LLC

excessive repetition but good

By the end the character stats were clocking in at over 21 minutes. Seems a bit much, don't you think? The story is good enough to trundle through the slog though.

The worst written story I have ever come across.

In a nutshell, the writing is poorly thought out. I would love to express why the writing is so poor in my opinion however there are simply too many examples and one chapter to keep track of. to give a brief synopsis: every character has next to no individual identity traits, the humor is the same for each character, the dialogue is as uninteresting and lacks any real depth or conversational turns, the plot seems as if it was decided by the role of a dice often times conflicting with established rules or principles previously stated and the descriptions and details focus on the sexual aspects of women characters oftentimes glamorizing their physical features and submissive behaviors while condemnating the same behaviors the writer is showing (for example a character will demean someone for a woman caring how she looks saying woman aren't slaves to men's need, then turn around and refer to said woman character as b--ch the rest of the novel, refusing to use her name).

the entire novel is trash. I finished it in hopes that there would be something redeeming about it however there was not. don't waste your time with this unless you need some fire starter.