The Conqueror of Zones

Dual Sword God, Book 4

De: Shadowsfinger

Narrado por: Kevin T. Collins

The battle continues as the scene within the Ancient Dragon Battlefield has entered into its final act.

The mission of the Chosen One has once again resurfaced, sparking the prelude to the end of an ageless war. Follow along with our protagonist and his mighty companions as they boldly charge forward into this epic confrontation, bearing witness to this war's climactic end....

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The MC is pretty useless throughout the entire book

There is almost no focus on the MC in this book. even after he gets a power up, it goes straight off to something else and when it gets to the point where the MC gets time to shine, he ends up being completely useless.

Too many characters

No focus on the Mc, listening to battles I like trying to pay attention to a hundred separate battle most of them you don’t know at all

supernormal

The writing is mysterious and strange with many sudden changes. The odd author probably used an unusual writing tool and some unknown parchment. Since everything is described like this visualization is futile.

Good story. "change" used too much

get story, great narrator, i like the Main character, but the word Change is used wayyyy to much. "but than something changed" is said 1 to 2 times at least in every chapter. still highly recommend

narrator good, style of writing bad

the story gets annoying when everything is "strange", "mysterious" or "unknown" like an golem being made of an "unknown alloy" or everything utilizing strange energy, strange light, strange dress, strange thunder, or strange aura. strange to whom? all these things are normal world magic. why would all these things be out of the normal? the author should say a long forgotten secret alloy. use words like "sacred aura", unique, distinct racial face Ki, stop throwing around the same words over and over again.

Up to book 4 and I am disappointed.

On book 4 so far totally disappointed in the books. Yes I say books. Book 1 so far was just ok. The rest so far is greatly disappointing. I paid money for the credits for these books(sheesh). As far as this book is concerned: mc is overshadowed. If you are going to create a story about multiple mc’s don’t write a book that advertises about a single mc. Needs a lot of improvement. Mc means main character not a secondary side character.