World Cataclysm

Dimension Apocalypse, Book 2

De: Shadowsfinger

Narrado por: Michael David Axtell

In light of the nearing disaster, the world had grown aware of the looming threat, bringing forth chaos as it slowly descends toward the apocalypse.

In preparation to face off against the great calamity, Evan has decided to level up and awaken his companions as Dimension Transcenders. They must venture into the unknown territories of a dangerous Fragment Rift—one that would grant them a trial like no other before.

Rumor has it that two mighty conquerors had overthrown its ancient world. They had reigned supreme for centuries being undefeated by many, guarding the secrets at its core.

With disaster lurking all around them, Can they rise to the challenge?

©2022 Shadows Finger (Orange Campbell) (P)2023 Podium Audio

I’m very good screenplay.

I really enjoyed this book, but I can’t help but feel that I was reading a screenplay rather than a novel. I only have two complaints about this book. The first one is the main character was hardly in the book. I think all his activities maybe only took up about 20% of the book where the remaining 80% was from the perspective of all the other side characters. The second criticism has to do with cosmology, It is very obvious that this author, doesn’t know anything about cosmology. I know this is a fantasy story set in a distant, future but the laws the deal with the speed of light should at least be consistent. The Milky-way Galaxies is not our solar system. A telescope cannot see what is happens in distant galaxies in real time. I can go on about this. This author very good with fantasy cultivation novels, but not so good with science fiction.

Love Interests Stop The Story Cold

It seems like every story has to have love interests in it. And when they do the story is put to the side and we focus on the person and they’re body’s. Being described in more detail then the actual world. This had an awesome premise but is ruined by the love interest. It seems like the author was suffering from thirst when writing this book.

Look if you want to write a slice of life teenage love book then go for it. But if you want to write a story with a world and stats and stuff then leave out the love interest stuff because you are not adept at including them in your story.