Traveling the Dungeon

Dungeon Travels, Book 2

By: Alston Sleet

Narrated by: Doug Tisdale Jr.

Length: 9 hrs and 25 mins

Publisher's Summary

Dale wanted to do more than survive as a dungeon core. His experience with the gods made it clear that with power, he could do as he pleased, and without it, he was simply a toy of the powerful. Unfortunately, it isn't just the gods who have plans for the Traveling Dungeon. 

Follow Dale as he tries to create his own little world, study magic, enchant devices, and create challenges for the gods and an (Arch-Mage). All while trying to keep Miss Blue-Box happy. 

From The Spire of the West to the Orcs of the South, to a discovery that will rock the world, Dale can't help but shove his stone where it doesn't belong.

©2020 Alston Sleet (P)2020 Alston Sleet

So good but fuck that cliffhanger

Well put together well written and A fun ride not a fan of that cliffhanger at the end but on the bright side I can’t wait for the next buck

just not for me

I couldn't finish this one.

Somehow the protagonist is even more annoying than the first book. Combine that with the overall story feeling directionless and the tumor l humour not landing with me... yeah, just not for me.

Be prepared, a large majority of the book is the protagonist describing, in excruciating detail, the faux science behind his magic and constantly correcting himself.

While probably an accurate representation of some of what would go through the mind, it's exceedingly dull. Like reading through someone's working-out on their math exam.

The sheer amount of info dumps is staggering.

also the authors predilection to use certain phrases is annoying, yet not annoying, more that I'm annoyed at being annoyed. (that's the thing I'm talking about)

Rambling tangents about how things work are spoon fed with lots of detail. The reason why scifi just slaps some science words together and glosses over the fine details of precisely how a warp drive works is because it's boring af, please follow this example instead of giving me half baked dimensional minutiae.

Performance was great, but the overall book could do with a proper editor to tighten the story up.

Finally, cliffhangers suck.

nonstop funny

the authoring makes the MC seem real by bringing out all the quirks and making one one to see how quirky the character can become. there is not overarching antagonist other than the MC himself.

just say no to cheap cliffhangers...

Book was largely the same as the first... no real threats, less dungeon building but lots of world building...

ends on a cheap cliffhangar.

good not great however

this book series wile not bad also does not and will not fall under legendary in scope. however if your looking for a "good" book to tide you over for a few days while you search for a book of legendary scale then it's a good pick.

Liked almost everything.

loved most of the book, until it reached the ending. It changes everything. Which I'm apprehensive of because I liked what it was before. Not looking forward to book three because of it.

word diarrhea

I think my title speaks for itself. this book has word diarrhea, a whole bunch of explaining on how things work and why they work with very little dialogue between characters or developing of the overall story. Dale the main character has only reached out to his supposed goddess once in the book. I had to call it quits with 2 hours remaining because nothing has developed from the story.

Awesome!!!

Was totally surprises by the ending and didn't even notice that the book was almost done. Can't wait for the next book!!

Loved both books

Hoping we get a third. Don't let the haters get you down this is a great series and is lots of fun to read.