The Vault of Krohn: Kaley's Story

By: William Randall

Narrated by: Debbie Soelter

The tale of Kaley, in the Vault of Krohn - one of four narratives which tell the whole story. Listen to them in any order - the stories are meant to build on each other, adding to the final tale. The order you listen them changes the way the story is revealed, and thus how you perceive the story!

©2018 William Randall (P)2019 William Randall

Pros and cons

Pros: The author has created a very solid interesting story. He spent a great deal of thought to develop strong characters with a fun enjoyable story line.

Cons: The narration is hard to understand as she tries to imitate male and foreign accents. The narrator comes across as childlike and unprofessional. The hesitant cadence of her speech reminds one of a young reader trying to comprehend reading above the readers educational level.

I’ll buy the book so I can fully enjoy this story without straining to understand this narrator. The story would be great for a read. This author William Randall has a great imagination to develop characters with such deep content. Keep writing, I’ll keep reading!

Riveting

I am in awe of the writings of Mr Randall he always keeps me on the edge of my seat