Saltwater's Weep

Avalar Explored, Book 2

By: Deacon Frost

Narrated by: Joshua Story

Craving revenge for the betrayals he suffered, Jace and his companions set out to conquer some dungeon floors to gain what they need to seek their revenge.

Traveling to Saltwater's Weep is a dangerous journey. A powerful coterie of adventurers led by the Warlord rules the city. Their dark fingers extend throughout and nothing is as it seems.

Taking his time to plan his attack, Jace seeks to gain control of new allies and servants before he sets out on his Quest. Join him as he takes new lovers, fulfills new temptations and gains in immortal power. Watch villains creep from the sidelines with agendas of their own. Can a fledgling Incubus survive in a dangerous world when might makes right?

Saltwater's Weep contains explicit elements and some adult content.

©2021 Deacon Frost (P)2021 Podium Audio

chaos and adventure

loved every moment with Jace and his group making sure his ties with individuals memorable and always changing

Good but

I enjoyed this book I liked the leveling the pacing and the story but the overload of stat sheets really killed the speed of the story for me and made me peck at this for 2 days still good and I’m giving 5 stars but I’m hoping book 3 will be better

Good sequel

I loved the character development and the little unexpected twist. What frustrated me is how the author forgot he gave him a Title.Something minor, but it happened in the same book! Unless I'm the crazy one. Overall though, I liked it. Good read

Titles

You keep saying he has no titles after he defeated the lake monster which granted everyone the title of titan slayer. I figured it might just be a single slip up but now near the end of the book it still says none under *titles* half a dozen character sheet checks later. Hope this gets fixed in later books. Otherwise it’s a great book.

Great but…

I would have enjoy it more if only the updated stats, new skills, and new/updated quests are mentioned. Hearing all of it every time is very tedious. Otherwise, it’s great

the story was the most interesting

I love all the charaters in the story. The way they describe the women and the fight scenes are very telling.

enjoyed it

it would be nice if the skills/stats list was abbrevieviated. otherwise it is a good story

mediocre narration

the narrator has a good enough voice, but the pacing is too slow and inconsistent. fortunately, if you put the book on 1.3 times speed, or greater, that problem goes away completely.

Decent story...format needs work

I enjoyed the first two books and will definitely get the next...just wish the author wouldn't go through the MC's ENTIRE stat/skill list (with descriptions) 2-3 times per chapter. Gets very annoying.

Would be better to just describe stat changes upon leveling and list full status at the end of a chapter so it can be skipped easily.