Fractured Spirit

Alpha World, Book 5

By: Daniel Schinhofen

Narrated by: Peter Berkrot

Fresh from the success of capturing Gwain’s Keep, Alpha Company is in high spirits. Flush with coin, everyone is eager to get better gear and see what new zones they can go fight in.

Not everything is roses though, as the first testing phase is about to come to an end. A number of those who ventured forth with the guild are about to return to their regular lives, and the next wave of testers brings even more players to embrace Alpha World as their new reality, if only for a limited time.

Alburet has new complications to deal with, but he doesn’t have to face them alone. Two other loving women - Fluffball and Karen - whom he has accepted the love of will be at his side as the revelation of his past comes out.

Will Alburet be able to handle what he has hidden from himself, with the love of the trio of women beside him? Or will he break and fail, leaving his spirit fractured?

©2018 Daniel Schinhofen (P)2018 Podium Publishing

Disappointed

The author forgot they were writing a litRPG and instead focused on fantasy erotica. The characters were written even when fighting to discussions over sex or sexual activities. I am not a prude and am ok with some sex but the story was forgotten making me post this poor rating.

Rebound!

After the last book was slightly disappointing, the series has rebounded with possibly my favorite of the series so far.

Not nearly as good as the rest of the series.

It does a lot of development of the narrative but it feels forced and like a lot was trimmed out to make it fit and even then, it felt as if it was dragging. Even the cliff hanger was only introduced near the end. I really hope that the next one will be better.

This one hit me in my heart bone the hardest.

This was the best book in the series yet. And that's saying something. Because they are all so good.

still good

give the series a chance if you haven't already. The quality of the series stays consistent.