Making Monster Girls

For Science!

By: Eric Vall

Narrated by: Alex Perone, Marissa Parness

They call me mad, but I don’t see anything wrong with using science to create the perfect monster girl.

They call me insane, but I just want to live my life with a harem of beautiful cat-girls, bear-girls, fox-girls, snake-girls, and...well, pretty much any type of monster girl.

They call me a megalomaniac, but why wouldn’t any red blooded man want to make cute babies with all these beautiful monster girls?

They call me evil, but they just don’t realize that I’d destroy anyone who tries to harm my monster girls.

©2020 Eric Vall (P)2020 Eric Vall

good wholesome fun

i listened to the whole thing in two sittings at work and look forward to the next installment

Fun whimsical story

It takes place in a world ran by Women. Served by men. Fun story, enjoyable

frequently breaks from the worlds logic...

example:
in an extreme matriarchy ,where men are almost property and assumed to be simpltons. a man and woman are confronted by law enforcement and they speak to the man as though he was the more important of the 2. even when the woman speaks, the police (men) disrespect her when men are executed for MUCH less.

these events are jarring. the inconsistency nags at you during and slightly after each occasion.

Great listen

The narrators are just wonderful. The story line is better than first thought. It has a good sequence of events and flows well. hoping it continues through the series. going to check the rest of the books today.

The premise and world is cool and unique.

The premise and world are cool and unique; however, the story and plot falls short.


** Spoilers!! You have been warned**

our MC ( main character) is a Male in a feminist dream. Men are seen as less (yes less) than dirt to the powerful matriarchy of elemental women. Our mc is task with a project to make men into super soldiers by a duchess of a small town. mc fails, and accidentally create a monster girl. from there he goes through trails to save his life and the lives of his monster girls from the duchess, police, etc.


**Spoilers end**

The plot is like a ecchi manga like High School DxD or monster musume ( a monster girl title). unlike those titles, Eric Vall actually has his mc get fluffed multiple times. there is also the big plot holes of our mc not getting evict from his duchess homestead, or house. He keeps getting away with not coming up with results for his duchess super soldier project. then I see what could be some serious world building of adding some blood magic to the story and men actually begin more powerful than women when it comes to more....chaotic magic.

Story is Meh. Nothing to write home about, but also not mind blowing.