The Whale on the Veil

A God Complex Short Story

By: George Saoulidis

Narrated by: Don T. Lassen, Donna Tellame

When a young inventor tries to crack the issue of mainstream Augmented Reality, he hits a few obstacles on the way. But will he manage to complete his dream, when his new girlfriend is taking up all of his thoughts, when the funding he needs is unreachable and when the breakthrough he needs is always just out of reach?

A short origin story about the God Complex Universe.

©2018 George Saoulidis (P)2019 George Saoulidis

GOOD READ!

I enjoyed it! The narration was good. The author did a good job with the characters. I look forward to reading more from this author. I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.

Nice little backstory to the Veil

This little short basically introduces the creator of the Veil (which features in many of Saoulidis' other stories) and how he came up with the idea.

I found it entertaining and a nice entry in the God Complex universe. There were two turn-offs however: the voice used for the protagonist was comically nerdy (almost nerve-grating) and the gratuitous sex at the end didn't seem to belong. Almost felt like the author was horny so wanted to throw it in and tie it into the story.

Overall a good listen though