Digitized Online, Book 1

By: Richard J. Thorn

Narrated by: Nathan Lujan

Ivanhoe Darkwolf

He entered the game in a blinding flash of light. He had no memory of who he was, where he came from, or why he was here. Where was here, anyway?

All he knew was that he had entered an online game full of magic and wonder and fantastical beasts.

But something was wrong. The world that he knew was gone. All the people. His family, loved ones, everything had been shattered and stolen from him.

And he was tasked with saving the last remnants of the human race.

But he wasn't alone.

In a race against time, Ivanhoe must overcome his fears and battle his way to victory.

But the AI had other plans. She didn't know that there were any survivors. Not at first. Time is NOT on his side. Will he fight and die alone? Or will he pull other digitized players into the game to aid him on his quest?

In this epic novel, you will find adult themes, violence, language, stats, and more!

©2018 Richard J. Thorn (P)2018 Richard J. Thorn

narrators are key and this one false flat

the story is good the author e shows that he is someone to be watched and while there is some teenage angst male chauvinistic sexuality it's a good story major problems 1 the sex scenes are something that's not needed they just tracked from story and another problem is the narrator he's done great work in the past with this one he had problems with there were points where he broke the flow in such a way as to make you want to shake him and say dude what are you doing also there were problems with the sex scenes it's like yeah we're doing this it's just disingenuous

Just reading the story, no storytelling

Narrator just... reads the story, doesn't try to take you into the book. I couldn't get passed the first chapter because I simply didn't get hooked.

a bad high schooler fanfiction

I tend to like Fiction with sex scenes in it but whoever wrote this sounds like a high schooler or very bad cheesy porno none of the sex scene sound like something anybody would actually talk about when having sex and unfortunately the narrator don'ts and Help the fact this narrator no range of voice whatsoever sounds like he's just reading from a book.

story sucks

the story and narration sucks. never let this guy narrate anything ever again. terrible. wow

Narrator

You Need to find a different narrator his constant heavy breathing is distracting and very annoying