Return of the Legendary Lord Omnibus: Books 1-3

De: Marcus Sloss, Seth Pike

Narrado por: Christopher Harbour, Mandy McCullough

One great series in a single offering!

Base Building, Babes, and Battles!

Join the Legendary Lord as he is reborn again, this time to fight an evil God that's threatening the existence of his very land. But first he has to build his stronghold, battle monsters and get to know the beautiful Elven queen Leyathel, among others if get to know means what you think it means…

However, there's a slight problem. He has no idea who he is, why he was reborn, or what he’s supposed to do. Mere trifling details that won’t stop a Legendary Lord even if it takes him a little bit to get settled into his new environment!

This is a 4x LitRPG Harem book with: Levels, War, and a Quest for Domination!

©2023 Marcus Sloss and Seth Pike (P)2024 Royal Guard Publishing LLC

Needed More Time To Develop

Three books weren’t enough to really expand on the main character. *Spoiler* Character development was good for the first three wives, but fell short when the last ones were introduced. While I was invested in the first three, the rest didn’t have enough time to build their character.

Main character needed more depth. Some of his dialogues were too blunt or stiff instead of organic natural. There were definitely some cringe moments where the dialogue fell short and took himself too seriously.

Overall this needed to be 4 or 5 books long to better develop the remaining wives so the readers would be more invested. The main character needed more background and personality.

The story was decent, but the lack of character development that the writer is wanting us to like some of the main characters and be invested in was hurting the story being told.

It was...okay.

It started out well and set up a lot of potential. Each wife could have been her own book. But then it changed and it felt speed up. Maybe not rushed but just quickened. Lots of barrowed ides from WoT and LOTR. The male reader was okay, a little flat but fine. The female reader, she was always flat.
The use of modern vocabulary was jarring and pulled me out of the reading when used.
In all, it was okay.

wasn't for me

felt it was shallow with a rushed ending. would have returned it if it was an option on the app

fun for what it is

it certainly isn't the highest peak of writing but it's serviceable for what it is. although the VA doesn't get into character until like book 2. the wizard hero is a great character

Wake up confused but motivated

the MC wakes up and has no past memory. He has a high motivation drive to succeed in life. the story is fast pace and fun to listen to. long story for one credit. great value. Not for kids.