Alpha’s Forbidden Mate

An Enemies to Lovers Paranormal Shifter Romance

De: Luna Sharp

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Auctioned off at the Alpha shifter ball, my fear turned into my fated mate.

Searching for my twin sister had left me broke and up for auction at the Alpha shifters Ball.

Adrian, the alluring Wolf who bought me, expected submission.

All he got from me was a slap in the face.

Despite my insubordination, he offered to help find my sister.

In exchange, I was at his service.

Working with him tested my resolve as I tried to deny the desire I had for his talented tongue.

I indulge in the attention he provides, and he fills me with more than satisfaction and joy.

But when my magical powers began to emerge, the pack viewed me as a threat and wanted me dead.

Now, with the return of an ancient threat, my alpha will have to save me before my dangerous magic unleashes an evil destined to consume us all.

very poor use of timeline and my time.

author had an interesting plot but failed multiple times to keep it plausible. timeline was constantly wrong. Characters did things out of character multiple times.

VV is awful

Never will I listen to another VV narrator. The story line was ok but went back and forth on time line.

I can’t with the virtual voice narrator

Honestly the story may be good but I couldn’t focus on it at all due to the VV narrator. The inflection is all wrong and sounds most of the time monotone /nasal . It is not worth a credit or the number of hours required to listen to it.

It didn't rise to expectation

The AI voice lends nothing to the story. It provides absolutely no human inflection which is necessary for a romance novel. The story also seems as though it was written by AI. The use of language seems unnatural and misaligned for a romance novel.

Not a fan of the AI narra

Please just hire a real person. I'll even take the woman that seems to narrate all the paranormal romance books. Also, the content puts me in mind of fan fiction. And it's all the place.

Random

This was so painful to listen to. A lot of the Story doesn't match the way they are trying to depict the novel. And why are the two main characters soooooo stupid?

not a gan of narration.

maybe story would be better if real narrators would do it, besides that- heroin is annoying, she supposed to pore orphan, living with Bad stepmother, but she is super spoiled, super ungrateful, and honestly a little bit too much " I need to find my sister, I need to find my sister and leave, I need to find my sister, I need to leave"

Disappointing

I realized it wasn’t real actors but was disappointed on the lack of emotion and or wrong pitch at the reading. Also should have had Female/male voices

not worth the money

the Virtual Voice was bad, like listening to a phone menu 10 years ago bad. the same droning slightly nasal narration no matter what the scene. the same voice for all characters so that I can't distinguish between them.

often the story distracts me from the VV, but this one is written nearly as badly as it is spoken. please, get a good editor to catch the mistakes and gaps!

Childish female character and weak alpha

This story line is great, but would be so much better if the female character would stop being bi-polar. First she wants nothing to do with him and flips to lust all within a paragraph. I find her very manipulative and emotionally stunted. She lives within a pack but doesn't understand what a mate is. Alpha is supposed to be feared and dangerous but folds under her words and doesn't take control. After 14 chapters I was beyond frustrated and can't finish it.