Being confronted on the beach by a sexy stranger wasn't part of Natalie Conner's plans for a peaceful morning taking photos. And why on earth would he think she's taking pictures of him, anyway? Who is he? One thing’s for sure, he’s hot, and incredibly romantic, feeding Natalie’s wounded soul.
Luke Williams just wants the world to give him a break, so seeing yet another camera aimed at his face has him ready to pounce on the beauty behind the lens. When he finds out she has no idea who he is, he's intrigued and more than a little tempted by her. Natalie has a body made for sex, a sassy mouth and Luke can’t get enough of her, but he’s not ready to tell her who he really his.
Natalie is a no nonsense girl who doesn’t do well with lies and secrets. What will happen to this new relationship when she discovers what Luke’s hiding?
©2012 Kristen Proby (P)2013 Audible, Inc.
I normally would not feel qualified to write a review when I can't even finish the book but its just that cringe-worthy that it has to be said. I made it to half way thru the first download and was literally cringing. It's so corny. 1 star is a gift. A couple meets and in less than 24 hours they can't live without each other. "Natalie" had issues which turned her into your basic slut but supposedly got over them and isn't a slut anymore but for some reason is begging for sex in less than 12 hours after meeting a stranger on the beach. Luke, a self imposed recluse, falls madly in love with Natalie in less than 12 hours because she is so amazing. Why he thinks this? No clue. I am seriously laughing at how dumb this is. 1000 apologies if the story becomes amazing in the end but to me it is like nails down a chalkboard and I can't listen anymore.
As for the narrator, her female character sounds like baby talk at times. Dumb dialogue in baby talk....Cringe!!!! Coments like, "do you work out?" and "I like it when you wisper" and "so, no sex?' CRINNNNGGGGEEEEE.....!!!!!!
The story was too perfect.
I think the narrator was perfect actually.
I would have changed the frequency and redundancy of the sex scenes.
I have not read anything in this category but it came up on my screen as recommended so I gave it a try. Don't bother if you are older than 20 and actually like a story. This is just endless so so sex scenes with a few fantasy adolescent scenarios in between. I really really tried to get my moneys worth but just couldn't get past half way through.
Not in this series, good description not enough story in the plot.
no real story boring just feelings
There was a lot of potential for this story but no two people can do it as much as Luke and Natalie. I wanted to like this book so much but I was having to skip ahead a lot. If you are into that kind of thing you might like the base story with it as it is cute. Since it was not my favorite I thought Natalie got her just desserts in the end.
A lot of fantasies, the best boyfriend every woman can ever image. Hansome, kind, rich, generous. Most important, he loves her from inside and outside.
It's good to konw there is a relly Luke for evrey girl.
I'm a bored Alabamian looking for a way to escape!
I couldn't finish listening to the audiobook. Chapter 11 was as far as I could go. The narrator sounded so young, not someone in their mid-20s. Listening to it felt icky. Chapter 2 was the worst. I thought she inhaled helium during the recording of Chapter 2.
Yes, with a capital YES.
If they had a different narrator. The story may be okay, but the voice sounded like a sixth grader. That gave it a slimy quality.
I don't know and do not care.
This is a perfect example of finding the right voice for the character. The voices sounded so young; I tried slowing down the audio and it didn't help. Speeding it up sounded like Alvin and the Chipmunks. Terrible. The narrator should do kids voices or pretend or even teenagers, but nothing older.
Techno-Thrillers, Jack Reacher, Mitch Rapp fan!
OK plot that is somewhat predictable but keeps your attention.
Definitely X-Rated. NSFW
This was the first novel I have heard J. Mack read. She blew me away. Probably the best performance I have listened to in almost 1000 books/tapes.
I have rated others with a 5 star performance, she has raised the bar!
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