Being confronted on the beach by a sexy stranger wasn't part of Natalie Conner's plans for a peaceful morning taking photos. And why on earth would he think she's taking pictures of him, anyway? Who is he? One thing’s for sure, he’s hot, and incredibly romantic, feeding Natalie’s wounded soul.
Luke Williams just wants the world to give him a break, so seeing yet another camera aimed at his face has him ready to pounce on the beauty behind the lens. When he finds out she has no idea who he is, he's intrigued and more than a little tempted by her. Natalie has a body made for sex, a sassy mouth and Luke can’t get enough of her, but he’s not ready to tell her who he really his.
Natalie is a no nonsense girl who doesn’t do well with lies and secrets. What will happen to this new relationship when she discovers what Luke’s hiding?
©2012 Kristen Proby (P)2013 Audible, Inc.
I can't believe I finished this book. I get that the plot is secondary but give us something of a story line. This reads like a sappy, boring diary. Even the sex parts get boring.
was so hoping I'd like this series but it's so flat .......
her voice is fine but she's purely reading; no character - maybe it's just the writing but there's no character in this book; purely flat
no character; the narrator's voice is fine but the story is so flat. I want more character and twist. 'baby' just doesn't do it for me.
I normally would not feel qualified to write a review when I can't even finish the book but its just that cringe-worthy that it has to be said. I made it to half way thru the first download and was literally cringing. It's so corny. 1 star is a gift. A couple meets and in less than 24 hours they can't live without each other. "Natalie" had issues which turned her into your basic slut but supposedly got over them and isn't a slut anymore but for some reason is begging for sex in less than 12 hours after meeting a stranger on the beach. Luke, a self imposed recluse, falls madly in love with Natalie in less than 12 hours because she is so amazing. Why he thinks this? No clue. I am seriously laughing at how dumb this is. 1000 apologies if the story becomes amazing in the end but to me it is like nails down a chalkboard and I can't listen anymore.
As for the narrator, her female character sounds like baby talk at times. Dumb dialogue in baby talk....Cringe!!!! Coments like, "do you work out?" and "I like it when you wisper" and "so, no sex?' CRINNNNGGGGEEEEE.....!!!!!!
The story was too perfect.
I think the narrator was perfect actually.
I would have changed the frequency and redundancy of the sex scenes.
I have not read anything in this category but it came up on my screen as recommended so I gave it a try. Don't bother if you are older than 20 and actually like a story. This is just endless so so sex scenes with a few fantasy adolescent scenarios in between. I really really tried to get my moneys worth but just couldn't get past half way through.
Not in this series, good description not enough story in the plot.
no real story boring just feelings
There is no story , no plot.
Overall pretty stupid book , total disappointment. Abandon half way through.
Wish there was some way to get refund...
I liked some of Kristen Proby's other work, but this was ridiculous.
Make the male lead more believable.
The narrator didn't have a ton of inflection in her voice, she wasn't terrible, just meh.
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