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Holy boring batman. My dog could write better stories than this drivel. Topping off the sophmoric ramblings is the overly affected "sexy" voice of the narration and her trying to do a mans voice for the boy parts and totally sounding like a tranny........ whooo you have a real crapfest. Where is the returns department?
I was very disappointed! Extremely repetative and unimaginative. It was painful, I couldn't finish it. It had to be a man writing under a woman's pen name, and a very inexperienced man at that.
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