Werewolf’s Heartsong

An Alpha Werewolf Romance Series with Supernatural Bonds and Passion

De: Angie McMillon

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

A fierce fighter. A powerful wolf. A soul ready to roar.

The arena lights blaze. The screen flashes my new name.
There I stand—strong, unbreakable, and finally free. My wolf radiates power, beauty, and vengeance. From the stands, I see their faces twisted in rage—my jealous sister, my bitter parents. They never thought I’d rise this far.

But they were wrong.

I strip away the last remnants of who I used to be. Cardigan. Skirt. Fear. Doubt.
Standing on that platform in my tank and capris, I take my stance. No more hiding. No more silence. This is where I show them all what I’m made of.

This is where I fight…
For my name.
For my wolf.
For my heartsong.

If you love:

• 🔥 Steamy werewolf romance

• 💔 Emotional healing and personal power

• 🐺 Alpha Classes, fated mates & fierce rivalries

• 🎯 Strong female leads who refuse to be broken

…then Werewolf’s Heartsong will grip your soul and never let go.

Glad you used the male AI voice again.

Liking the story, though I will admit there are some things I liked a bit better in the first version I listened to.

The biggest issue though is there is a severe need for proofreading and editing. I'm not sure if your doing that yourself or not. But if you are it might not hurt to have someone else either read or listen (read would probably be better). There are multiple chapters that basically just repeat what was already said in the chapter before it, just in a slightly different way. It doesn't even seem to be from a different perspective, just the same chapter written differently but not removed. This did happen occasionally in the first version that's on this app but this time it happens a lot.

Another issue is several instances where the wrong person was mentioned. Accidentally referring to Alora as Darien's mate instead of Serenity. Once at the start of the testing before they say down and Matthew was looking at Alora it said she was being held by her mate. That's not possible for a couple of reasons. One Damian is at college hours away. Two Alora doesn't even know yet he's her mate. There's a few times sentence structure seems out of order. Like before you actually got into Darien and Serenity's mating seen it said after they were basking in the after glow of their love making but then cut to Darien just walking into his room to see his mate waiting for him. The further along it went the more mistakes seemed to be happening that could have been caught from editing and proofreading.

Again it's a good story and there is some more depth and I like the addition of some of the new characters. For example, it does and doesn't make sense that she has a camaraderie with others in her Alpha ranking. If you're familiar with the original it doesn't completely make sense but since they have been training together it also does.

It almost feels like your rushing a bit to get the new rewrite out where personally I'd prefer you take a little more time a polish this gem.