Tracker

Classified K-9 Unit Series, Book 6

De: Lenora Worth

Narrado por: Vanessa Daniels

Mission: reunite mother and son

Single mother Penny Potter has spent months in hiding to keep her toddler from his father, a rogue FBI agent turned fugitive. But he's determined to flee the country with the child, and she can't dodge him forever. When he corners Penny in the Montana wilderness and gets away with their son, she's forced to trust his brother, handsome FBI K-9 Agent Zeke Morrow. And Zeke must decide where his loyalty lies: with his sibling or the woman he wasn't supposed to fall for. As the bullets fly and family ties are tested, Penny and Zeke will fight to save the boy who brought them together.

©2017 Harlequin Books S.A. (P)2019 Tantor

Absolutely Incredible!

Amazing and well written story. I have loved this entire series and will miss listening to it.

Great Story Line & Performance

I enjoyed this whole series and the performance was amazing. The way so many different scenarios were played was enjoyable!

I read the complete series…

I really enjoy this series. I love mysteries and romance. These were perfect for me because they were wholesome and clean.

Meh

I think the book might have been partially written by AI. It has a man cooking for a woman. A man being a father figure for a single mom’s child. A strong, independent woman who isn’t dependent on a man but still fell for a cad. It’s redundant, predictable, and slow. Also, the characters often contradict themselves.

The characters seem to be all over the place emotionally with contradictory and inconsistent feelings and statements. “I can’t do this now…5 minutes later…she can’t deny her attraction..KISSING…I can’t be with you because you remind me of your brother…KISSING…this is a big mistake because of my job…I’ll always take care of you..KISSING…I’ve lost him because he looks upset…” At one point, the female protagonist states, “You don’t really know me.” Well, whose fault is that but the author’s?

This story should be pulling together all the loose ends of the previous books, but instead, it dwells too much on the delayed romance of the protagonists, the guilt of the younger brother, and constantly reminding the audience that the characters DO NOT KNOW yet.

The action climax was just confusing melodrama with the strong female more effective than the males. The villain is the hero in the end. The FBI incompetent. The male and female protagonists are too proud and cowardly to say what they really mean. This IS NEVER the way to start a relationship in real life. The audience knows they will get together in the end, but the author has to delay it as long as possible with the excuse of misunderstandings which stems from one person’s refusal to speak to the other.

Instead of having the characters act the out the plot in order to “show don’t tell,” the author uses an extended dialogue explanation at the end to tie up loose ends. It was like having the characters read her story notes aloud.

The female protagonist stubbornly and selfishly keeps her son from his extended family because of her own false assumptions and refusal to work out her own problems. Constantly reminding the audience that she has false assumptions is not adequate. Women deserve better fiction than this. People shouldn’t act like that in real life. People who have lasting romantic relationships have to learn to talk to each other and not assume. The unwillingness to talk or listen based on the assumption that one character knows what another is thinking is just a horribly overused plot device designed only to draw out the tension and extend the book. In a real life relationship it is dysfunctional. This should have been the best book of the series, but I liked it the least. Maybe I’m expecting a result that the genre is not supposed to give in the first place.

Poorly written and dramatized

The description and ratings were promising but I couldn’t get into the story or manner of writing. Boring and without imagination!