The SOLDIER and the ALPHA - MM Gay Shifter Mpreg Omega Romance

De: Canis Blackfang

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Jim Luck is a covert scout trained to operate undetected within the verdant forests bordering enemy lines. Luck is assigned a new partner named Ken Loveall, a man with an unhuman-like ability for tracking down enemy targets. Deep in the forest with only each other as company, Luck is about to discover the passion that can brew between two soldiers – especially when one of them is a vigorous alpha werewolf!

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Story good but too short

The voice was choppy and delayed at times. I liked the overall story but it was so brief that there was so little character development and the one intimate scene was almost an afterthought. Could have been a better read.

The short story was well written and well thought out. I enjoyed it.

I don't like the computer narrator. It phases too long sometimes, and hearing a sex scene with no appropriate voice inflections was off-putting.

Not a fan of virtual voice.

This book was read with virtual voice, I’m not a big fan. This is the first virtual voice. I’ve listened to the tone was very flat, and there were long weights at the end of sentences in between chapters. I very much prefer listening to a human.

Soldiers

The story lines twists and changes. The characters seemed real and easily imagined in the fantasy.

Fast

It was very rushed. No real development or explanations are provided. They could have continued the story so very easily and it had potential to be good.

Lame

The automatic reader is annoying- the story is suuupppperrrrrr lacking. I feel like there was no effort put into this

Terrible voice narration

I’ve listened to virtual voice before. This one pauses too long for every paragraph break, and even longer for page breaks- sometimes mid sentence.

The story switches perspectives without any warning, making it awkward to follow.
Sex scene feels like an afterthought added in much later. And really? -first time with no lube or warmup???

more like one chapter

this is a chapter in a book that describes the alphas member better than it does the one scene