Serum

A twin, athlete, and scientist leaves a trail of destruction defending her marvel serum.

Mia’s parents have never supported her—all their attention and praise are reserved for her twin sister, Unity. When a car accident puts Unity in a coma, Mia follows in their footsteps as scientists, hoping to finally gain their approval. Instead, she finds something more surprising and monumental—an experimental drug that promises to upend humanity itself, as well as Mia’s understanding of her own past.

Too outlandish

The story was too outlandish. Additionally the narration was off with both emotion and appropriate character.