Rejected Wolfless Luna

Betrayal, Rebirth and a Forbidden Fate

De: LEA ADKINS

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

After betrayal, rejection, and heartbreak, Kate thought she had nothing to lose. But fate had other plans.

“I waited for you, Brian. We both agreed we’d wait,” I snapped, my heart shattering as I glared at him. But there he stood, carrying a she-wolf’s child, tearing apart the last of my trust.

“In that case,” Brian shot back, his eyes cold, “I, Brian Joseph Scott, future Beta of the Silver Moonstone Pack, reject you, Catherine Jones, as my mate.”

“I accept,” I growled through the pain, the bond severing like a knife to the soul. But the agony of his rejection was nothing compared to the wound left by his betrayal.

Once the cherished daughter of Alpha Duncan and Luna Melissa, Kate's world shattered when she was gravely injured in a pack attack. Her best friend Sarah’s betrayal, followed by the rejection from her fated mate, Brian, leaves her grappling with both her newfound physical limitations and emotional scars.

But after returning from rehab, Kate’s life takes an unexpected turn. She crosses paths with Alpha Colt and his brothers Grey and Sam—three strikingly powerful Alpha triplets on a mission to find their destined mate. Despite the pain from Brian’s rejection and her second chance mate, Ethan, Kate now faces a choice that could change everything.

Will Kate let her pride stand in the way of accepting her new mates, or will she find the strength to embrace a bond unlike any she’s known before?

In a world of heartbreak, healing, and second chances, Kate's story is a journey of resilience, love, and the power of fate.

Dear author, I want the second book

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Dear Author,
I suggest titling the chapters by the name of whomever's perspective it takes place in. ie. 9 Cole, 10 Sam, etc...
It would also be a good idea to have a few people go threw it for autocorrects.
Also to note any time the program comes across a stammer like "G.. g.. go" it states the individual letter name. A really common occurrence in this book is "F. c,k"

I definitely want to listen to the second book.

I enjoyed the dynamic between the brothers.

Also I really want to know more about Kia!

And I want a paternity, test! That whole situation smells fishy. So I'm hoping it doesn't get glossed over.

great potential, but needs a lot of editing

This novel has a lot of potential and I enjoyed the synopsis, FMC and her eventual mates.
However, it seems like no one did a read through and if someone did they missed A LOT of unfinished thoughts/character development, spelling, repetitive sentences, chapters and words. The story basically feels like this was a very rough draft from a new author who hasn't written much. I believe if it was read through by a great editior and even some fans to give in biased feed back and suggest some minor additions to some chapters here and there this could be a fantastic listen/read.

Incomplete

The story is left without an ending, and the virtual in voice is terrible. Partially spelling out words stumbling through added letters for emphasis, and revealing a good many uncorrected typos if my guess is correct. It was a really difficult listening experience. The plot needs work too.

meh

The story was very rushed and left a lot to be desired but the virtual voice was horrible.

Either AI or horrible editing

I call AI because it tends to not know how the human body works. It also tends to forget one instance from the next. There is no breaks between scenes it just jumps head first into the next section. Repetitive actions. “She blinked with her eyes.” Duh… only a machine or program would put this in writing. “She walked to her mother.” Meer minutes later her diagnosis is mentioned. The story could have been good even with AI narration. The above mentioned makes it not so since this happens all the way through the book. Also the appearance of the curses and how they were left in edit so as not to flag the story, leads me to believe it was maybe stolen from wattapad. Audible do better.