Mystic System

A Harem Dark Fantasy Adventure Reincarnation, Book 1

By: B. Dent

Narrated by: Olivia Neel

Length: 17 hrs and 2 mins

Publisher's summary

Many yearn for a different realm, where the allure of enchanting women, otherworldly abilities, and thrilling adventures beckons.

But what if you were born into a world where you're regarded as nothing more than a mere tool, utterly unsuited for their intended purposes?

Plunged into the depths of despair, having lost that which he cherished most, the unmistakable chime of a notification altered not only his destiny but the very fabric of all existence. Yet, whether this change was for the better or worse remained uncertain.

"The host's current vessel is deemed inadequate for the system; physical transformation is underway," "Physical transformation complete; as a one-time reward for surviving, the host may make a single wish to the system."

Embark on this journey alongside Daimon in a world where the so-called 'Gods' are merely mages of higher rank.

Disclaimer: This book is intended for mature audiences. If you don't like a harem and R-18 chapters this novel is not for you.

©2023 B. Dent (P)2023 B. Dent

needs an editor

the story is pretty good but between really bad grammar and the voice acting its hard to listen to

Let's make it simple.

Yes there is some tabu stuff in this book so ether you are fine with it or not.

Personally i like this book, if you have an opened mind and see past current societal norms maybe you will like this one too.

could be better

she mixes the voices and that ha ha can go.
ya it's definitely the voice actor.

good story, poor editing, ai narration

i liked the story. the taboo content doesn't bother me.

the narration is clearly AI and when held to the standards of such it's not too bad.

could of used some editing.

Reminds me of Anya Merchant

I really enjoyed the story but wow the A.I. laugh was so bad. Don't understand why they don't edit.

So So

grammar was so bad I really don't see how the narration was as good as it was. also the narrator needs more practice getting the voices the same for each character. but overall the story had a catching storyline if you can move past the gross incest. it was like the author want the reader to overlook the incest by changing the race of mc and mother, and a few other things as well, but then had the mother and son refur to each other as mother and son when in the bedroom. not my thing, but I don't judge.

it's decent

I like it but it's annoying to have damond and Dimond mixed in the same sentence.it takes a lot of pieces from diff rpg and it is blended well together.

need some of the grammar fixed

a good story but it still needs a little bit of the grammar fixed other than that is great

What a waist!

This book had lots of potential and could have been a fantastic harem dark fantasy. The world is creative and new, the MC is OP and unapologetic, and his system leave the possibilities endless. All that is completely ruined by two things: First, out of place anime style laughter that does not fit in dark fantasy. Second, and worst of all, INCEST! And not the step parent variety, or the you raised me but we are not blood, but the you are my mother, I am your son, and we look enough alike that people think we are siblings. I am so sad about this one because it could be an interesting harem dark fantasy story with loads MC domination of foes on a path to revenge but instead we got the grossest incestuous acts on repeat.
The audio book narration made the whole thing worst!
The narrator had the ability to do multiple voices but somehow used the wrong voice for the wrong characters. There were times she used a male voice for a female character or vice versa. This include using a girl voice for the MC at the most inopportune times.

Narration and grammar completely ruin this book

Interesting story concept but narration made it impossible to finish. 9 hours in and I just can’t listen to any more.