Limitless Lands, Book III: Retribution

A LitRPG Adventure

By: Dean Henegar

Narrated by: Jack Voraces

Length: 15 hrs and 8 mins

Publisher's summary

As the medpod continues to repair his time-ravaged body in the real world, Colonel Raytak’s foes inside the game world of Limitless Lands execute their carefully-laid schemes, seeking his ruin. Wrongfully accused of treason, Raytak finds himself a prisoner of the Imperium he serves.

To clear his name, Raytak is forced to fight in the arena, seeking victory in the Emperor’s Grand Melee to earn his freedom…but he can’t do it alone. To win, he must forge brutal prisoners, cowards, and deserters into a fighting force capable of conquering every gladiatorial team standing in his way.

Meanwhile, an ancient threat stirs in Hayden’s Knoll and the zone is left unprotected in Raytak’s absence.

Will Raytak be able to regain his freedom and his honor? Will the new threat destroy the zone before he can return to fight it?

Find out in Limitless Lands, Book 3: Retribution.

©2019 Dean Henegar (P)2019 Dean Henegar

Much improved!

Out of the 3 books I believe the third book to be my favorite, or at least as good as the first. Dean Henegar has a way of making the world feel like it is still in motion while Raytek (MC) is doing his own thing. Raytek is falsely accuse of being a traitor and sent for trial to the Imperial Capital. On his way to the capital, Raytek is sold to perform as a gladiator and promised that if he does well he may be able to regain his freedom. Rayteks friends are not standing idly by, however. The rest of the group is looking to help clear Raytek's name by finding out who was actually behind the events prior to his arrest. I think what had me more interested in this book over the first and second book is that there were a lot less boardroom meetings. I liked hearing about the games progression and the work done on the med pods, but the voice acting here was very distracting and the british accent pulled me out of the story. That is why this book not including such scenes made the experience more pleasurable. On top of this, Jack Voraces sounds like he has become more versatile in his voices.

awesome!

absoulety loved it! great story and i hope to read the next one soon. thank you!

great book

thank you so much, this story is amazing and alot of fun and a great excape

Great addition despite a rushed ending

coming to book three I am already very invested in the series and the journey. I loved the coliseum / gladiatorial aspect of the story and it was handled very well. The section of the novel at the end where they battle for hold fast, felt very rushed though. it felt as if that could have been the opening story arc of the next book and given more time to be flushed out, but they just dove straight into the action and defeated them handedly. otherwise this book was fantastic and did a great job of continuing the series and story

Ending is lacking, narration lost me

The story was pleasant. Definitely took some cues from the movie, Gladiator (2008). I enjoyed it until the ending that I zoned out. This foe that was built up over the course of a few chapters served only as a last road block that ultimately held no consequence. I would have preferred them to have had a larger role in the next book, but I won't be continuing the series due to my qualms with the narration.

After the first 2 books in the series, I enjoyed the fresh concept of a recovering veteran in a fantasy world so I was able to dismiss the narration quality. Due to my losing interest in the final act of the story, I noticed how much I was bothered by the narration. I did not really enjoy the voices used for Yendis and other characters as they were very harsh characterizations (which is actually fine when it comes to antagonists). There were also several mispronunciations as a result of the narrator's accent but it just bothers me too much. It comes down to personal preference so if any prospective listeners read this, the story itself is definitely worth listening to.

It gets even BETTER!!!

I really enjoyed the twist the story took and was happy with how it played out. it was very much like a side quest that pulled the character temporarily from the main story quest. The main character is some one whom you root for the whole ride.

I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.

if u like the first two this is for you

just as good as the first two definitely worth a listen highly recommend u will enjoy

highly recommend

storyline and narration far above average finally another book where the MC isn't a whiny crying millennial thank goodness I highly recommend this book

must have

You must by this book! You must by this book! You must by this book! Awesome Amazing Astounding!

Great Book!

I received a free copy and am leaving a voluntary review.

In this book Raytak is disgraced and must fight in arenas to attempt to regain his freedom and honor. His friends go on a quest to try to prove his innocence. Meanwhile, enemies continue to plot to build their power at the expense of others.

I really enjoyed this book. If you liked the prior books in the series, I recommend this one too. it was interesting to follow the unique path Raytak's story took. I liked the battle strategies he employed. This book has some especially touching scenes that were sweet and emotional. Of course, there is also Crunchy to provide comic relief, making the book well rounded, like a complete meal with everything you could want.

This book is narrated well, which adds to the entertainment.