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His Secretary: Undone

By: Melanie Marchande
Narrated by: Elena Wolfe
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Publisher's Summary

I'm about to throw an ashtray at my boss's head. Turns out, the mind behind my favorite, steamy romance novels...the ones I only read in private...the ones that are my only escape after a long day of dealing with The Boss from Hell? It's not Natalie McBride, the sweet, rural housewife. It's him. That's right: my boss, Adrian Risinger, the 33-year-old, maddeningly sexy, pissant billionaire "bad boy" who thinks he runs my life. He is also the author of all my deepest, most secret fantasies. And to make matters worse, he needs me to impersonate "Natalie" at a series of book signings and conventions. But, of course, that's only if I want to keep my job. On second thought, I'm going to need something heavier than an ashtray.

©2014 Melanie Marchande (P)2015 Audible, Inc.

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I TRULY LOVED THIS STORY

Of course the narration was excellent. Elena Wolfe never disappoints. The dialogue was so witty and cute not to mention the HOT SEX. I don't give reviews about the details of the book or the complexity of the characters but I can tell you that if you have enjoyed any of the other books I loved , you will love this one. GET IT

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I WAS RIVETTED TO EVERY DELICIOUS CHAPTER

Long suffering Megan has been working for Adrian (aka the boss from Hell) for 5 years, 5 years of unreasonable demands, unpleasant exchanges and gruelling working conditions but somehow Megan has a love/hate relationship with her job and her funny banter, quick witted responses to Adrian and amusing thoughts keep her sanity intact. But Adrian is about to push Megan to her limits.... and way way beyond.

Megan and Adrian are a couple I instantly loved and couldn't wait to hear the next Chapter in their warped and twisted relationship that very quickly turns to breathless passion and hot sex when their 'all business' weekend away ignites into lust filled glares, jealousy, smouldering kisses, passionate pleas and they have a sexually charged weekend. But back in the office Adrian is formal once again and so there's an emotional roller coaster with their names clearly on it just waiting to raise them to the heights of ecstacy then plummet them into the depths of Hell. Where they land is yours to find out.

Worth a credit? Told from Megan's POV except the last Chapter which is all Adrian's, entertaining characters and Megan is a larger sized woman who gets her man (yaye for her), hot sex scenes, dirty talk, there's surprises and twists, it's a fun filled plot with a very entertaining storyline and the narrator did a great job. It was all I hoped for and much more than I expected, so creditworthy.... Hell YEAH.

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Not so good story, narration fail with male voice.

HMMMM. The story is barely okay and it could have been better. The story line and plot were interesting at the start but I feel like this would have been a better story had it been written in the third person and not the first, or even a dual POV. (although I am not a big fan of 1st POV's sometimes they are okay, this one not so much)

You never got Adrian's POV. It was all her POV. You just had to ASSUME? KNOW? he was into her. Because you get nothing from him. So read between the lines of the dialogue to figure him out.

The story line and plot started out good but then it just sort dwindled and it was all about the sex and the sex and the sex. Oh yeah, and the sex.

I did like Meghan and her character, she was strong, opinionated and said what she wanted, She was also witty. I was surprised she was described as big with dimples in her butt. I know that was part of the story line, the handsome arrogant billionaire likes plus sized women. You don't know that until you start reading/listening to the story though. Also, she is supposed to be insecure about it and she was a little but not much at all, to be honest. Which I am kind of glad it ended up being a mild insecurity, anymore would have been annoying.

I liked Adrian as much as I could considering you didn't get anything from him or about him except from her POV until the last chapter of the book. And his POV was seriously lacking in that last chapter.

This really was a one sided story and to be honest it really suffered from it. In addition I found some the the dialogue to be really cheesy.

As for the narration, Every thing was great until Adrian's voice. He sounded like a woman. Which sucked. Yeah, the narrator needs to work on her male voices for sure, otherwise the narration was good. So she loses stars for bad male voice.

Looks like I am in the minority with my review. Oh well.. It's my honest opinion and review and I just ended up not really liking it.

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Hoorah for the full figured women.

If you could sum up His Secretary: Undone in three words, what would they be?

Really great story

What was one of the most memorable moments of His Secretary: Undone?

When Adrian crossed the line of privacy.by moving her stuff without her permission and she made him move it all back

Which character – as performed by Elena Wolfe – was your favorite?

I loved them all. she's a really good narrator. I will definitely buy what ever book she narrates.

Was this a book you wanted to listen to all in one sitting?

yes, and I did.

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Honestly, I was bored

This was a very unbelievable romantic fiction. Any GOOD fiction is at least believable. This was unrealistic, unbelievable and unlikely. First of all no actual description of the main characters were given except that he is tall and looks like an underwear model and she is a plus size and that's IT. Then the first sex scene happens at the work's pool area. The entire scene is poorly done. The sex part is done nicely but the way it all happens is again unrealistic. Characters are immature and honestly I was so bored I could not wait to be done with this book. I kept hoping if I just suffered through more that the story would get better but it never did. Reading this book was like watching porn in the sense that you get good sex but the story around it is supremely insufficient.

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hot and cold

Any additional comments?

There are LOTS of guys out there who are only interested in "secret" relationships centered on hook ups. Understood. What I don't get is why some women keep going back for more- is the "hot" really worth the freezing cold? He shows up at her place when he wants sex- and pretends he barely knows her when he doesn't. Are you sure this should be listed as a romance?

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Sooooooo good!

I didn't expect to be wowed so much! Great original storyline! Great chemistry! Hot sex! HAWT! Amazing audio performance! Highly recommended for romance lovers!

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Totally predictable.

This is one of those quick mindless reads. Within 30 minutes you'll know how it's going to end, but you'll read it anyway. Will you remember this book in the years to come? Nope, you won't even remember it a few days later. But, you won't regret reading it because it cured your boredom for an afternoon.

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Just so so

It was just ok. I'm not super picky about my sexy romance reads but I do prefer SOMETHING to happen. I understand there is a format that is followed in these books and usually I like to get sucked into their lives and angst. But nothing happens in this book. The narration was really well preformed though. I don't know that I'll use a credit on another of this authors books though.

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Yawn

what a difference between first and second books. Borind, predictable, and impossible. Assholes don't magically become nice, and billionaires don't go for plus size girls.

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  • Yvonne
  • 09-10-15

Surprised

Really enjoyed this book and hope book two comes to Audible , the narrator was good and the story line quite different , would recommend this read

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  • Sue
  • 08-18-15

Lovely and Refreshing

Would you listen to His Secretary: Undone again? Why?

Yes, probably. Because it's an easy romance read. It's your typical billionaire romance, but not quite. And I could relate with the plus-size Megan. Love the story!

Have you listened to any of Elena Wolfe’s other performances? How does this one compare?

This is my first time listening to Elena Wolfe. And she's a wonderful narrator!

Did you have an emotional reaction to this book? Did it make you laugh or cry?

I snorted with laughter for the most parts. Megan's funny and the narrator did a good job bringing the character to life.

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  • Marta canejo
  • 11-11-20

Fantastic book... great read and really funny...

I really enjoyed this audiobook... the narrator really brings the book to life and I laughed so much... it has been a while since I enjoyed the book so much that i was sad when it was over...

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  • Trisha
  • 08-28-16

Brilliant

If you could sum up His Secretary: Undone in three words, what would they be?

A fantastic read

What was one of the most memorable moments of His Secretary: Undone?

The swimming pool incident

Which scene did you most enjoy?

The swimming pool

If you made a film of this book, what would be the tag line be?

The boss you love to hate

Any additional comments?

I loved this book. I have never read any of Melanie's books before but have just purchased another and hope it is as good. Elena Wolfe is a brilliant narrator and as always really brings the characters to life. The book was funny, entertaining, deep and brilliant all round.

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  • Eileen
  • 04-16-16

Great book

This is a good book to listen to anywhere and only when you have loads of time

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  • lindsey foster
  • 03-24-16

Nice for a bigger lady to be wooed.

For a change the lady narrating this is fantastic. She reads it with ease and has emotion. The story is good and I personally rate it 5*.

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  • Cheryl
  • 09-24-15

The best book! Loved it! Will playback

Loved it. The story is different from the usual billionaire sexy.

It's so well written and narrated that you feel like your listening to a story from a friend.

I laughed out so loud I made the woman next to me jump.

It's an emotional roller coaster of a story but well worth the ride.

Smashed it!

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  • Susan Rogerson
  • 09-23-15

Good book

I enjoyed this book , I am looking forward to reading more books from Melanie Marchande .

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  • haley
  • 08-15-15

loved loved loved

refreshing all the way a must read please bring us more. one book just is not enough

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  • DJ (@drinkingdixy)
  • 08-03-15

Amazing!!! Sexy!!!! funny!!!

I have listened to this all in one go. I just couldn't put it down.
There's nothing not to love about it.
It was funny, sexy and everything you want in a romance story.x