Godscourge, Book 2: The Ash Trials

A Progression Fantasy Adventure

De: Felix Taylor

Narrado por: Michelle Stull

A crosshair on her back, and a soul pact with a god. Now, the true climb begins...

Vayra has taken her first steps toward ultimate power. She’s advanced two ranks, learned arcane techniques, and put together a crew. But the gods and their children are still miles above her. Her quest has only just begun.

She needs to find a teacher, and fast. With hordes of bounty hunters and powerful godborn on her tail, she’ll need to add new abilities to her arsenal, and she’ll need to push to greater heights.

When an opportunity to earn the patronage of a mysterious fire-wielding mentor rears its head, she seizes her chance. She ventures off to a distant world to prove that she’s worthy of training—with new enemies and old rivals close on her heels.

A weak-to-strong, slow-burn progression fantasy adventure with earned advances and steady power growth. Dive into a cultivation- and xianxia-inspired seafaring fantasy world with immortal gods, galaxy-spanning empires, and an underdog main character.

©2025 Felix Taylor (P)2025 Felix Taylor

Interesting, but...

I didn't actually write anything on the last book. That said. I would like to write a few things for this one. So, to start.
The premise of the story is interesting. However there is a little pet peeve of mine with the main character. Being a "street rat" who survived to young adulthood is a pretty good base, but ... How is it that somebody who would need street smarts and an analytical mind just to survive! Be... so... Incredibly impulsive and incompetent? It seems all that base amounts to is her ability to jungle gym her way around city terrain. Even with that she seems to be slipping around on stairs and flat terrain half the time. Ugh... It twinges the lizard part of my brain.
That said, at least seemingly every other character has basic common sense to function in their galaxy. Perhaps the flow saught an equally incompetent mediator to match the ineffective goddess. Who knows at this point in the story.

For the voice acting. I haven't actually researched this voice actress yet. So I can't really say if she is new or not. With that said. Her voice is very calming. It is nice and mostly enjoyable. I feel she has the voice for this line of work.
For a little constructive criticism towards her I would like to recommend reading over the chapter you are working on and look towards the descriptors for the characters lines. Maybe make some notes to set aside during the recording. It can be a little jarring when the character whispers or shouts something only to sound the same as their general conversational tone. Knowing what is coming before hand in the reading can help.

Other then that. It can get a bit confusing when all the male characters sound the same, but learning the male inflections and chest speaking is tough and takes time.

You have a wonderful main character voice though. I hope you continue at it and find your place to shine in the voice actress/narrator line of work.