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Frame of Magic

Narrated by: James Killavey
Length: 19 mins
4.5 out of 5 stars (6 ratings)

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Have you ever wanted something so bad it hurt? Or tried your best to do what was right? But have it go horribly wrong?

If only Amundus knew what he was about to unleash....

Unfortunately for him, everyone's about to find out the hard way.

©2018 Jonathon McElhaney (P)2019 Jonathon McElhaney

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I loved the ingenuity of this book! It was steam punk horror with a twist! Absolutely loved it!

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Fun concept

Never thought about combining the world's of magic and steampunk but it works. I'd definitely be interested in hearing more from this world. The narrator could slow down just a touch a but all in all it was a good story.

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Sorcerer's Apprentice in Steampunk

Stories should be either character driven, or plot driven. Here there is only one character, and he so flat I had to listen twice to be sure he had a name and not just a title. Only an inciting incident, alkst an IOU for a plot,

The Steampunk magic system was interesting, then the author doesn't do anything with it.

I want to see more from this author, I want to see more of this story. This needs to be expanded into the first chapter of a longer work.