Fae's Captive

By: Lily Archer

Narrated by: Shane East, Mackenzie Cartwright

Length: 3 hrs and 8 mins

Publisher's Summary

My college roommate is the worst. Cecile steals my food, brings guys over at all hours, and parties instead of studying. But those quirks pale in comparison to what she does next. She drugs me, and I wake up imprisoned in an alternate universe full of terrifying creatures. Now, the biggest and scariest creature of all - a fae king - believes I'm his mate. He's freed me from the dungeon but keeps me close. So close, in fact, that I'm beginning to like his wintery gaze and ice-chiseled body. But secrets and villains lurk throughout this new world, and I don't know if I'll survive long enough to figure out how to get back home.

Author's Note: Fae's Captive is the first book in a series that will set your imagination - and other parts of you - on fire. Mind the cliff, but book two is already out.

©2019 Lily Archer (P)2019 Lily Archer

3 hours and 8 minutes is not a book!

It took me a few hours to calm down before reviewing this. I am PISSED!

The story took right off, although, I could have lived without the first chapter, which felt rushed as if the author "had" to put something down and couldn't wait to get to the Fae world. Once we're in the Fae world, the story flew. It was engaging and action packed, and the moment the first...FIRST...rising action hit, the book...stops and we're told to go buy the rest of the book!

I am returning the book because it isn't finished! I will not be buying the remaining series. This is literally 25% of the book and I am pissed! I feel like the author is just out to make money. I feel taken advantage of and hurt.

IF I had gotten the whole book and IF the story and writing and continued like the first 3 hours, then I would have given a solid 5. It's like, if JK Rowling had ended the first Harry Potter book the moment Hagrid kicked down the door on that little stormy island! WTF!?

And...AND!!! 10 minutes of that 3 hours and 8 minutes was because one of the chapters was read TWICE and out of order! The poor editing was between Chapter 10, 11, 12 & 13!

Incomplete

Spoilers: This ends in a cliffhanger.
This book is well written and engaging. The narrators are excellent. But this is not a complete book. According to Amazon, this is book one out of four. Until it is a complete book, I will be returning this and I’ll wait and hope it becomes a COMPLETE book.

Interesting short story, good performance,

A lot of people complain about the length of this, yet you know the length before you buy it. it is too short, however the story is a good one.

Very short!

it was extremely short!!! only 3 hrs long. you have to buy the next installment to get the rest of the story.

!!!! Please read!!!

This is one book broken into several it’s really annoying , because I feel like they did it just for money. I really like this story and I wish I could get passed how annoying it is that every time there is any pivotal point in the story the book ends! Surprise 5-10 dollar’s for the next couple chapters. So they’re are 7-8 books that should be one.

Ummm.. What? I feel cheated.

Okay so, not bad at all. I was really into it and the n... Buy book two. So before I did I read the reviews.... Book two still another cliff hanger... And all and all for all 4 books at 7 bucks each.... 28 bucks?!?! Okay.. It's a good story but it isn't THAT GOOD. I can buy 2 black dagger brotherhood books for that much and they're complete!
I feel overall it's a sad milking of money for a so so story in comparison to some greats. Like breaking it up makes the cost more digestible?

Got me hooked!!

Shane and Mackenzie did an amazing job. there's something funky with the last 3 chapters. At first I thought the beginning was a little weak. But I was absolutely hooked by the end and have to know more!! so on to the next one. And yes, this is the length of a novella that ends on a huge cliffside. Sometimes bite sized stories are nice. No complaints from me so far.

Really short including glitch 2x chapter midway through.

It’s pretty short to begin with, made worse by the duplicated chapter out of sequence which was really confusing. Other reviewers had noted this as well- perhaps the book was meant to be longer (Ie have an actual story line) but it was glitched out? I enjoyed the taste of what can best be described as a preamble but not an actual story. My 2 stars would have been 4 had it not been half a story.

love it 😀

even though the story is short I love it so far can't wait to read the next book

Push Though it!

I ended up listening to this whole series in 3 days.... I am new to auditable so I don't know if that's normal 🤣 Yes this is broken into several books but it's one story. the character development is amazing. this is an amazing series! there will be parts that you just roll your eyes at, but push though it!

far too short

would love to continue story but not buying 3 hours at a time. Especially when one chapter is repeated. Total rip off. should be a buddle

good story

Good story will have to tey the rest just don't get why they had to repeat chapeter nine on 11 it was just a waste

Too short

This book ends at the start of a journey and just as the main character is under attack. I can only imagine that the next book is of her survival of the wicked creature and is then going to discovery what is hidden and end before anything is found it ends.