Fae's Captive

By: Lily Archer

Narrated by: Shane East, Mackenzie Cartwright

Length: 3 hrs and 8 mins

Publisher's Summary

My college roommate is the worst. Cecile steals my food, brings guys over at all hours, and parties instead of studying. But those quirks pale in comparison to what she does next. She drugs me, and I wake up imprisoned in an alternate universe full of terrifying creatures. Now, the biggest and scariest creature of all - a fae king - believes I'm his mate. He's freed me from the dungeon but keeps me close. So close, in fact, that I'm beginning to like his wintery gaze and ice-chiseled body. But secrets and villains lurk throughout this new world, and I don't know if I'll survive long enough to figure out how to get back home.

Author's Note: Fae's Captive is the first book in a series that will set your imagination - and other parts of you - on fire. Mind the cliff, but book two is already out.

©2019 Lily Archer (P)2019 Lily Archer

3 hours and 8 minutes is not a book!

It took me a few hours to calm down before reviewing this. I am PISSED!

The story took right off, although, I could have lived without the first chapter, which felt rushed as if the author "had" to put something down and couldn't wait to get to the Fae world. Once we're in the Fae world, the story flew. It was engaging and action packed, and the moment the first...FIRST...rising action hit, the book...stops and we're told to go buy the rest of the book!

I am returning the book because it isn't finished! I will not be buying the remaining series. This is literally 25% of the book and I am pissed! I feel like the author is just out to make money. I feel taken advantage of and hurt.

IF I had gotten the whole book and IF the story and writing and continued like the first 3 hours, then I would have given a solid 5. It's like, if JK Rowling had ended the first Harry Potter book the moment Hagrid kicked down the door on that little stormy island! WTF!?

And...AND!!! 10 minutes of that 3 hours and 8 minutes was because one of the chapters was read TWICE and out of order! The poor editing was between Chapter 10, 11, 12 & 13!

33 of 34 people found this review helpful

Incomplete

Spoilers: This ends in a cliffhanger.
This book is well written and engaging. The narrators are excellent. But this is not a complete book. According to Amazon, this is book one out of four. Until it is a complete book, I will be returning this and I’ll wait and hope it becomes a COMPLETE book.

18 of 19 people found this review helpful

Interesting short story, good performance,

A lot of people complain about the length of this, yet you know the length before you buy it. it is too short, however the story is a good one.

2 of 2 people found this review helpful

Very short!

it was extremely short!!! only 3 hrs long. you have to buy the next installment to get the rest of the story.

3 of 4 people found this review helpful

Ummm.. What? I feel cheated.

Okay so, not bad at all. I was really into it and the n... Buy book two. So before I did I read the reviews.... Book two still another cliff hanger... And all and all for all 4 books at 7 bucks each.... 28 bucks?!?! Okay.. It's a good story but it isn't THAT GOOD. I can buy 2 black dagger brotherhood books for that much and they're complete!
I feel overall it's a sad milking of money for a so so story in comparison to some greats. Like breaking it up makes the cost more digestible?

3 of 5 people found this review helpful

male and female voice actors!

pretty good re telling of beauty and the beast. he is a warrior elf in this one and very sexy. this is a mated at first sniff type story. the world building is interesting (I love get books) interested to see where things go

10.99 for a short story.

This cliffhanger is poorly written. It is only 2 hours long and leaves you needing to purchase the next book in order to find out what happens.

1 of 2 people found this review helpful

unfinished

unfinished story. sucks if you are going to write a book than write the whole. book. story line is really good just too short

2 of 4 people found this review helpful

dear god. was it written by a neckbeard???

This is possibly the worst book I've tried to listen to on here. I know that is mean if the author reads this but I seriously couldnt even listen without a constant WTF look on my face. This book is everything wrong with the romance genre wrapped into 1, I am just desperately hoping this was supposed to be satire. They better refund me or on God I am canceling my entire subscription lmao

2 of 5 people found this review helpful

1/2 or less of a book

The story was warning up to be fun but I believed when I bought this that it was one story in a series. This is just one section of one book.. I dont mean a story ending in a cliffhanger. I mean a portion of an incomplete story. I would be asking for a refund if I had bought it at a bookstore.

1 of 3 people found this review helpful

Too short

This book ends at the start of a journey and just as the main character is under attack. I can only imagine that the next book is of her survival of the wicked creature and is then going to discovery what is hidden and end before anything is found it ends.